|Reviews for Children in Jungles|
| TashaRose chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
This says it is marked complete, but the beginning says Part One. So, I'm wondering if there is more or not?
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
awesome story! too bad you didn't write the 2 parts after that
| Mari Wollsch chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
is this the end? xx
| kage kitsune 14 chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Update soon. Will the kids still remember her?
| c3lph t1tl3d chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
well this was a great fic i can't wait to read part 2. Hope to read more soon :)
| MingMing-Chan chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
More please :D
| cinna-portia chapter 1 . 7/5/2011
There is a good chance that this will not be the first time I read your story. I can never get enough of the ones I love most, and Children in Jungles has got to be one of my all-time favourites.
Very well written. Thank you for sharing.
| Lucyole chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
wowie that was amazing, wonderfull and very romatic of some sorts i love it very good work
| NS chapter 1 . 5/21/2011
With respect, I must insist that you finish your brilliant, marvelous story as soon as possible. There are, after all, several unresolved conflicts in the tale. For instance, I'm quite sure Wendy will be worried anew for her innocent little charges after she recovers from her...encounter in the Captain's tent.
You ARE aware that you've written one of the most intelligent, riveting Hook-Wendy stories on the site, are you not?
YOUR PUBLIC IS WAITING!
With mingled concern and impatience,
PS Thank you for writing! I hope you're not discouraged by the lack of reviews. Even rare talent such as yours can go overlooked, especially in an unpopular fandom like Peter Pan (not to mention the unpopular pairing).
PPS You should read "Storyteller" after you've finished writing. Or perhaps you'd like to read it before completing your story? It would doubtlessly be a wonderful source of inspiration and rekindle your interest in the Pan-verse. It certainly revived my shriveled imagination! The author is Jalen Strix. The pairing I'm sure you can guess.
Take care now!
| Phoenix Rebel chapter 1 . 4/16/2011
That was great...except they haven't found the children and returned them yet! More...more...more...please...
| Illusion of the Mirror chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
I enjoyed this story quite a bit. You are a skilled writer.
| Janec Shannon chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
Red-handed Jill based on SJ Tucker's Wendy trilogy, right? Those songs are the reason I actually thought to look up Peter Pan fanfiction hoping to find some good red-handed Jill fics, of course. And this is definitely one of them!
| Umino Akiko chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
"Let it be known by those parties it concerns that it is decreed on this, the second of February, that one Captain James Angelo Hook of the Jolly Roger, in compensation for numerous crimes committed both at sea and on land, shall find himself until further notice in the employ of the British royal crown . He is henceforth bound to sail the Jolly Roger outside of royal jurisdiction to the uncharted island region of Neverland in order to pursue the fey child Peter Pan and to obtain from said fey child any kidnapped children previously gone missing from London and surrounding cities and evidently in the current care or company of Pan, to be reunited with their families of origin in a quiet and timely fashion, by order of her royal majesty, Queen Victoria."
Wendy looked up at him with a new sort of respect, very much impressed. It certainly explained a lot.
"Your middle name is Angelo?" she asked innocently.
At this point my head collided with my desk rather painfully. :) Nicely done.
| Claireena chapter 1 . 11/7/2010
This is a wonderful story, very rare to read something like this.
| xAndarielx chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
I absolutely ADORE this story. I was in the mood for for something to read before bed and I fortunately stumbled upon this little gem. Your characterizations of both Wendy and Captain Hook are fantastic. Their growing attraction to one another as the story progresses is lovely and, best of all, believable too. And Hook in the service of the British royal crown? Pure genius if you ask me, and I would love to hear how that came to be :) . I'm looking forward to parts two and three!