Reviews for Thirty Xanatos Pile–Up
Nanya chapter 4 . 10/4/2010
Um... Okay... I have NO idea what's going on, the part with Chao was kind of funny though.

Too bad you didn't have Bill and Ted show up, followed by Crono, Marle and Lucca.

As for the rest, well... Uh, pretty good, all things considered, I guess. It's still kind of... Random, very random, so it's hard to get a grasp on what's going on.
Juno chapter 3 . 10/4/2010
Lemme get this straight:

Fate/Stay NightNanohaNegimaRanmaTVTropes Death by OD.

Negi complaining about molesters? Somewhere, a certain mangaka just sneezed.

*Fridge Horror* Wait till Nanoha gets a hang of Raging Heart, crud, I pity Mahora's maintenance staff.

As for everything else, pure crack. Fukken win.

Can you tell me where you got that stuff you smoke? Because there is no way your mind can pull off this piece of work without drugs.

*Collapses and starts frothing in the mouth* W1n...
bissek chapter 3 . 9/28/2010
Does Genma know about Kyousei Panda? Or does he think Akane is planning to do that to him when she mentions it?

I guess Ayaka doesn't know about Saber... I'm looking forward to the mind break.

You know, Fate once tried a Sun Attack in the As manga. It resulted in Suzuka returning the ball and Fate being the only person lose a volleyball game by knockout.

Even with the named attacks, it still wasn't the most violent dodgeball game out there. That goes to Team Razor v Team Gon in Hunter X Hunter.
OverMaster chapter 3 . 9/28/2010
*Rolls sleeves up*

Okay, I'm going to have to up the crack quotient on 'Unequally' now.

Great job. First time in any adaptation, or even the original, I've liked the dodgeball game.
Aki Iokua chapter 1 . 9/28/2010


(Patiently waiting for the next chapter)
Ryuus2 chapter 3 . 9/28/2010
You got a whole page! Damn Sam, this calls for a party! WAHOOHOOHOO!

I am now reading Kampfer. I now understand the story to a degree. Who's the Moderator?

Ya know, when he isn't the star of a martial arts oriented harem anime, Ranma makes a good comedic supporting character.

Negi...complaining about child molesters...with HIS class and HIS roommates? Totally unbelievable. Especially with his roommates.

Setsuna and, interesting things are happening there. I wonder what Zazie's plotting?

Martial Arts Dodge-ball? Still not weirder than Ranma cannon. And what the hell with Kaede! Oh well. At least it wasn't the Byakusharinnegan. Wait...Miroku clan? As in La Blue Girl?

...Your most perverted story by far, if for nothing else than for that.

So Ayaka's personality change is...loli? Kampfer truly is a monstrous power. To turn Ayaka into a lolicon... I wonder how Kamofer Ayaka would react to Kitsu-Negi from the festival?

Keep up the splendiferous, phantasmagorical, awesome, incredible, mind numbingly good work!
1WiththeButterfly chapter 3 . 9/28/2010
That was a Load Bearing Pillar You Fool!

*Is Crushed by a Substantial Amount of Roof*


*Blue Light slowly lifts the Debris off of Me*

Anyway, Nice. When reading it, I thought nothing of it, but later, after its revealed how pretty much everyone who didn't participate is a Demon of some sort, Ninja, Mercenerary (or close enough that makes no difference), A robot, or someone else who would really be helpful. Silly Dodgeball game -

Kaede deserves a Sharinnegan. She wouldn't need it, but wouldn't it just be so cool. Ku Fei should get a ByAKugAn. Haha, incredibly lame pun -

(What the hell is the deal with that Emoticon I just made? Seriously, what is that suposed to symbolise!)

Nodoka as Hayate is something I somehow failed to comment on. Silly of me, especially since Nodoka is awesome. Her Magic Mind Reading Book works in 2 out of 3 situations, guaranteed. Although...Nah, I cant think of any downides for this (Evil Book of Evilness, Disability, Body slowly dying) No Downsides at All.

I'm getting more and more into the Fate/Stay night universe the more I look into it. I'm tempted to aquire the game. And not just for the porn :D

Liking Asuna's Inherent blaming Water for Everything. Makes for Good comedy.

It shocks me that I understand enough about Kampfer to be totally understanding what was going on in those segments. That must be the first time thats ever really happened.

Anyway, I think I'm out of points to talk about now, in relation to this Chapter at least.

Oh, congrats on the page. Will go check it out.

Till Next Time
MWkillkenny84 chapter 3 . 9/27/2010
Oh kami-sama...

Nanoha is in the Mahora.

Pray Fate-boy (the Negima one) for your life.

Vote: 10
Aoirann chapter 3 . 9/27/2010
I find myself adding examples to your page when reading these now. Also I have an idea for a oneshot. Negi and Harry Dresden wind up swapping jobs. Negi stops the supernatural incidents in Chiago by being so cute, And Dresden has to beat Asuna off with a stick during class.
bissek chapter 2 . 9/27/2010
What does Tomoyo think about Sakura-san giving away plushies that grant superpowers to other people? Or is that taking the crossover a bit too far? Or is this Rider's Sakura that is giving away the maimed plushies?

Setsuna should take lessons on how to stalk her beloved from Mizore Shirayuki.

Given the La Blue Girl references, is an aversion to tentacle monsters the reason Nanoha has not gone into the family trade in this continuity?
Ryuus2 chapter 2 . 9/27/2010
Waaaiit...If Asuna's adude with a girl curse...who's the dude?

Note to self: skim Kampfer Wiki when done browsing pactio pictures.

Setsuna's seems much more open in this story. I wonder if that means she'll jump-er, join Konoka sooner than in cannon?

Yuuno. Chamo. The talking rodent club is born.

...This is defnitely your most perverse work yet. The only thing that could be more H would be the Clow Cards instigating an orgy with Harry, Lee, and Winter.

Keep up the wonderous work!

P.s. Check out the latest chapter of my story, 'Of Magic and Mages.' You get a plug!
Lipana chapter 2 . 9/27/2010
Um... I don't know...I was kinda looking forward to a 2814 update.

Maybe I've built up a tolerance for crack because this chapter just doesn't do much for me...
Guest chapter 2 . 9/27/2010
Well, I think we just need to add another thing to Negi's List of Skills: Mage, English Teacher, Harem Owner, Can Turn Lesbians straight (for him only) AND tapped King Arthur. Yep.

And Se-Chan isn't a Stal...Well, you Se...I retract my Objection

Genma is probably the worst father figure ever. Promised the lives of himself and his son on the outcome of a bet, and just sorta went down from there.

Kampfer, you say? *One trip to Wikipedia later* Awesome. Next Project is to read the Manga. After I finish Reading Negima (Currently at Vol.6-ish) at least.

Till Next Time
Aoirann chapter 2 . 9/27/2010
Here I made you your own page. /Main/ShadowCrystalMage

(Sorry it's short. I had to go to school.)
Trey Miller chapter 2 . 9/27/2010
I read other peoples stories when I need to laugh. I read yours when I need to laugh so hard I turn purple and have a hard time breathing.

Kinda odd the number of times I actually *need* to laugh hysterically.

Anyway, dear merciful god, you know, I thought I felt bad for Negi before, but Rin *and* Saber? That poor, poor bastard (lucky SOB! X.X)...

Just please tell me you're not going to bring in giant mobile suits. No matter how dementedly funny that would be.

...And tying Rikiri Triken into this somehow would give it just enough of an edge to probably rip the universe asunder.

Yes, please don't mind the guy who wants the universe ripped into itty bitty bite-sized pieces. _
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