Reviews for The Pins
chibi-unicorn-girl chapter 5 . 8/5/2013
That was... I have no words. That was a nice little story. Nice? I can't think of the right words for this story.
MelancholyMadness chapter 5 . 3/9/2012
Poor Antonio. Short end of the stick. But at least they'll be together. I wonder if Lovino got scars from the pins. They'd have to be some pretty intense scars. If you do write a sequel, I will read it. Just tell me.

animeloveramy chapter 5 . 1/22/2012
thats really cute, but really quite sad...

i couldnt imagine antonio without his voice

loved it though, brilliant XD
ButterflyFlutterCry chapter 5 . 7/27/2011
That was soooo sweet X3 I have so many cavities right now!

I really loved this, it was so nice. The ending surprised me! And now, I shall stalk your Profile for a sequel :3

Hasta La Pasta~!
fricken ray of sunshine chapter 5 . 6/15/2011
awww! i love ze story. so cute. (like a little tomato)

LuminousXy chapter 5 . 6/1/2011
"I think that never being able to say "I love you" in my own voice so your ears can hear it is a pretty high price. Don't you?"

...that made me cry so much...

its so touching...
Peque Saltamontes chapter 5 . 4/20/2011

My chest hurts! Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww... "I think that never being able to say "I love you" in my own voice so your ears can hear it is a pretty high price. Don't you?"

... *dead*


-random Spanish-.
applefrosting chapter 5 . 2/12/2011
This was very heartwarming and very very sad, it made me cry~ I do hope you make a sequel~ I love hoe you ended it and i cannot not wait to see what happens to our little Spanish hero and his little tomato~
Yuka Haruna chapter 5 . 12/14/2010
That was soo cute, I feel like crying!

It was so sweet what Spain did, that was an amazing plot!
CashewLuu chapter 5 . 11/23/2010
This story is so incredibly bittersweet, it made my heart melt when I read the final chapter... God, it was so sweet of Antonio to give up saying I love you to Lovino and... I should stop, don't want to ruin for other readers ;). But anyways, great job~~
JellyMomo chapter 5 . 11/21/2010
Wow epic! I'd really want to know what happened with France and Canada though :D A sequel explaining that, perhaps? I really loved your 'happy-but-still-not-quite' 'maybe-ending' :D
XXilikecatsXX chapter 5 . 11/20/2010
for a short sory it was really good! i really do love it ahh but how sad that he cant say "i love you" but there are more than one way to say that oh whats up with Francis? whats his story if you dont minded me asking
Cancerous Galaxy chapter 5 . 11/20/2010
This last chapter made me wanna cry for some reason, dammit...
BakaRamenBowl chapter 5 . 11/20/2010

THAT WAS SO CYUUUUUUTE! It was a bit sad but really sweet!

And again I say:

Peppermint Napalm chapter 5 . 11/20/2010
Ahh, this was very cute. However, I don't feel like it was very substantial, and the plot moved




Slow down, take your time with feelings, build up the relationships between the characters. I felt like there was no character development throughout the story. Also, more exposition I feel is needed with this idea.

But, on that note, the idea is gorgeous in and of itself. With a little wording help and the like, this could shape up to be a thousand times better. You did a great job getting simple ideas across. I recommend looking at the writing style of Paulo Coelho. Overall, you did an alright job. I look forward to seeing your improvement!
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