|Reviews for Chimera|
| Pinkchick chapter 1 . 2/8/2011
You are a gifted writer. You love both boys and understand them, and that's clear through your writing. I loved that Dean was hallucinating (or was he?) his worst fears. Alastair, Ruby, and Lucifer fit perfectly into this, especially since you placed the setting of the story in season 5. I loved that the scenes were short, portraying what both brothers were seeing. Thank you so much for this great piece. Great brother stuff and hurt/comfort.
One small nitpick: there was a word here and there that was missing from a couple of sentences.
Besides that, great job! Thanks so much for sharing!
| Muffy Morrigan chapter 1 . 1/1/2011
This was just awesome. I loved every single word, every moment. It was a perfect treat tonight! (Yes, I am a little behind on everything, chock it up to the missing year of 2010) It was lovely to return to Arizona (lived there for years) and nice to have the brothers together as well.
Five Impalas all full of happy Winchesters heading your way with treats and cocoa to settle in for curling season
| greeneyedelf001 chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
Your one-shots are the only ones I read! The way you portray Sam and Dean is very true to character! Can't wait to read more!
| ReaderCassiopeia chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
I'm not exactly reviewing this particular story-I just wanted to let you know that I've read all of your stories, and have thoroughly enjoyed them! I hope that you continue writing; you definitely have talent.
| carocali chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
Not usually my cup of tea (the Dean h/c) but because it was you, I had to read it! Loved that Sam was smart enough to take a picture of the snake. That's the boy we know and love!
I like the battle in Dean's head with Luci and the gang trying to bait Dean into thinking that Sam would say yes. And I love that Dean stuck up for Sam. I miss that.
Thanks, as always, for sharing with the class! Feel free to keep posting stories!
| PADavis chapter 1 . 10/10/2010
Oooh, snake bite! I love that (big surprise) and loved this fic - not a big surprise because, hon, you just rock. Love Sam's determined drive, and the revelations of each scenes with R, A, and Luci. Beautifully done.
| mtee1958 chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
good story. Thanks for whumping Dean.
| darksupernatural chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
Finally...finally got to play catch up and I have to say I REALLY enjoyed this. It was so good. Nice touch with the beasties in Dean's head. Real or imaginary, it was very creepy. Awesome!
| anon chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
I'm going with imaginary because Ruby stays dead in my world. How I loathed that character and, I'm sorry Jared, bad actress.
You know though, I've always thought something like this should be posted in maternity war nurseries, just to prepare ya-
"Life's full of disappointments. Get used to it."
| CeCe Away chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
Man, snake-bit hallucinations really did a trick on Dean. I really enjoyed the spin you put on this, bringing in all the baddies to torment him. Funny Lucifer was the snake bit as well. Nice writing.
| Madebyme chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
What a thrilling read! You really know how to keep your readers entertained and on the edge of their seats.
I loved Dean's nonchalance here, trying to convince Sam and maybe himself that first it's a dry bite and then later that everything will be fine - like it's not a big deal to bitten by a rattle snake! His humour and 'game face' evident throughout his conversations with Sam was so very Dean.
Sam was spot on here and I really enjoyed seeing his geekiness and book smarts come to light. Knowing to take a picture of the snake, of the different bites and poisons released. And it nice to see his caring side too, giving Dean a blanket and eventually a sippy cup! Lovely touches.
Neat twist with Dean being visited by Ruby, Alistair and Lucifer. At first seemingly appearing as hallucinations caused by the venom but then you twisted it into becoming something more sinister. Were some elements real? We know that Lucifer certainly has that kind of power and I really liked that open ended quality to the story, the possibilities of what if? Very creative and befitting of the show.
I just ate this up! Now that you guys have season 6 I'm back on spoiler watch again and they're really aren't a lot of fics around that I can read so thank you for this! Have you and Harrigan discussed a joint project? I really think you should open up some negotiations, you could really do some serious fic writing together! Take care, Abbi
| Colby's girl chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
Loved the story. Nice twist with the demons and the devil tormenting Dean. Thanks for the read.
| Nana56 chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
Wow! This was awesome! I was totally glued to my monitor the whole time. :D
I don't know whether they were real or not, but it sure did make for some scary stuff! Whew!
Poor Sam! Having the responsibility of his brother in that circumstance was a horrible thing. Sure glad he sort of automatically tried the cell phone that last time.
Whew! This was some really good stuff! I don't think you and your muse are so far apart as you think. :D
Very nicely done. :)
| PhoenixDragonDreamer chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
This was awesome! Sheer perfection! Thank you for this!
| skag trendy chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
Dean really makes a terrible patient for Sam, eh?
Great story, hon. I don't actually mind snakes - I hate wasps more, frankly, 'cos the little winged bastards always come after me - but I sure a hell wouldn't want to suffer a bite from one. Nasty!
Even worse when you're visited by Ruby of all demons, followed by Alistair and Lucifer, taunting and threatening... poor Dean. It really wasn't his day!