|Reviews for Bloody Hell|
| kathyoberbeck chapter 29 . 8/1
Billion dollar smile, Ianto never understood how Jack could smile so open mouthed.
Huh. Thought that was just me. Good to know I'm not the only one. Do love his smile, though.
| sd4ianto chapter 30 . 3/31
Gwen was his friend, yeah okay we'll go with that. NOT!
| sandysan2013 chapter 31 . 6/12/2015
This is even better the 3rd time around!
| Guest chapter 31 . 4/29/2015
Thankyou. DottyWho. 29.04.2015.
| papertownheart chapter 28 . 5/4/2013
I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE (that is if that was in fact a purposeful Firefly reference at the end)
| Kikino chapter 31 . 5/31/2012
Absolutely wonderful. I had opened this days ago and just now started reading it and just couldn't stop myself. It was wonderful. I enjoyed it terribly.
I would like to thank you for the definitions (since I'm American and ignorant). I got a good idea of what most of them meant but your explanations helped ten-fold. So, thank you very much.
I caught most of the references. However, I somehow missed the second mention of the Doctor. I'll have to look for it some time in the future. There's a reference you used but didn't list that took me a few chapters to recognize. You first mentioned it with the hiding hankies in the bullet would thing. It drove me insane-I couldn't recall where I heard it. It wasn't until you mentioned the geese being juggled when I remembered Wash pantomiming holding goslings in his hands. You little hooker, using Firefly references. Brilliant.
Okay, now for the criticism. I thought the chemistry was beautiful and doesn't need defined. There are parts in chapters that should probably have gaps or little markers to let the reader know it's going to another scene because that can get confusing. Let's see, when Ianto's going through his nightmares with Canary Wharf, the miscarried(?) Lisa was different but I appreciated it. Would have like a brief mention of Breacon Becons(sp?) though. Not too concentrated like most writers have it, but a tiny mention would have been nice. Um...yes. The spelling. There are a few grammatical errors that could be fixed, misplacement/missing letter, the typical things that should be fixed. There are numerous times that you compound foreign words. For instance: I'd've. You should take out a lot of those. It's uncharacteristic when Ianto uses them. Jack is another story. You never know what he'll say. There's another thing you do a lot where you for the wrong compound. Example: How'd you feel now? It should be How d'you feel now? You're making him say How did you feel now instead of How do you feel now.
Okay, outside of that, I absolutely adored it. It's definitely going under my favorites. It was an absolute pleasure to read.
Thank you for writing it,
| Angstosaur chapter 31 . 4/21/2012
I enjoyed this ... and I got the Castle Anthrax reference ;-)
major Ianto-whumpage, plus worried, vengeful Jack and vampiric creatures? what's not to love?
it's a week since the Hub, but time travels differently in the real world and it already seems a long, long time ago ...
aka a short, dark-haired Torchwood fan known as B ;-)
| pennysstuff chapter 31 . 3/20/2012
Loved this story!
| aMirrorMaze chapter 31 . 7/28/2011
Hey hey hey!
I loved this so much! I have a feeling that you watch Firefly, my stomach gave a nice little flip at some references (Geece juggling!)
I loved the lines that just randomly popped from nowhere and had me laughing out loud for about 10 minutes...seriously, you made me cry with laughter! Especially the bit about handcuffs and nearly breaking desks...plus Jack pulling miracles from his arse. LOVE IT!
It was a brilliant plot and I can't believe the amount of reviews you have, this story should have 1,000,000,000,000,000,000 reviews!
Loved it. Thank you for making my day a billion times better, this story is going to be worth a couple more read-throughs!
All the best,
| Miga chapter 31 . 1/24/2011
Loved this story, read it in one go...
| jayni1000 chapter 31 . 12/16/2010
Loved your story! Nicely written and a pleasure to read. Your characters were very true to form, and I loved the random references running throughout the story. :P
| Quiet Time chapter 31 . 11/19/2010
Just found this, read the whole thing because I couldn't stop..Characterisation is brilliant, can just imagine all of them speaking exactly the words you gave them. Good take on the vampire thing, too. Thanks for a great read.
| pandora charm chapter 32 . 10/3/2010
very much so, thank you for finishing it
| Mundgawi1 chapter 32 . 9/29/2010
loved it! Has to be one of my favorite stories! Brilliant :D
| pandora charm chapter 1 . 9/26/2010
i like it. i wanna know what's going to happen to Ianto. So write some more chapters so i can find out please :D