Reviews for France's Magic Book of Pick Up Lines
Waveshine chapter 1 . 7/23/2014
oh gawd...*dies of laughter*
Aentiaa chapter 1 . 3/25/2014
That was adorable! The last scene though - why Spain you were so close D: A great read!
Spamano4ever chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
Do you know that I quote these lines to my friends? I love this story XD
broshipFanatic chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
Haha. I love the sarcastic humour in here, and somehow, I'm thinking that this story ends with Spain very bruised. I'll have to remember some of those responses, though...
(Advice: Change that bit in the first parts so it isn't breaking the fourth wall.)
BlueberryKittenLover chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
I LOVE Romano's responses XDDDD
Please do more!
OtakusUnite chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
ARE YOU CALLING MY BROTHER UGLY? lol I loved that one so much XD
rainbow world chapter 1 . 8/7/2011
Omg , I laughed so hard at this~
yaoirokzthebest chapter 1 . 4/27/2011
i always love stories that have pick up lines cuz they're soo funny!
LiveEatBreatheRepeat chapter 1 . 3/5/2011





Silvermoon of Forestclan chapter 1 . 2/2/2011
Epic! Love the comebacks.
AiRaine3 chapter 1 . 12/21/2010
omg i lol'd at

"When God made you, he was showing off."

"When God made you, he was pissed off."

"Lovi, the voices in my head told me to come over here and talk to you"

"Oh really?"

"Yeah really"

Lovinio then proceeded to kick him in his Madrid.


"Haha, Whadaya know. The voices in my head are smart"
Anime Freak Sammy chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
win. pure epic win that is awesomer than prussia himself. i think that another good line would be, "If we were on an island, I would eat you last."
Irrelevancy chapter 1 . 11/3/2010

Bad pick-up lines are my favorite thing~ Some of a bunch include:

"Hey baby, do you work at Subway? 'cause you just gave me a foot-long."

"You're like an overdue library book; you got fine written all over ya."

This is AWESOME~ Keep up the good work~!
Skadiyoko chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
OHMIGAWD! I laughed so hard! I wish hot Spaniards used cheesy pick up lines on me! D:
lunareclipse3 chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
LOL. I haven't laughed or smiled this much in...hours. But not at this level :D That was sooooo awesome. And so cute. Do I, maybeee, have permission to use some of these lines? But not in real life. Cause they'd get me killed xP

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