Reviews for Twelve Gates II: Sapphire of Despair
Halloween Witch chapter 6 . 12/27/2010
I understand where you coming from, when i first got on to Fanfiction, i started to write stories for twilight, I only finished one and came halfway threw or most of the way done before i became i love with the Hyper Force again and started writing about them, now i love TMNT AND the Hyper Force. I still try to update because not all my interest is lost I'm trying not to disappoint readers. But its understandable where your coming from, one day you will finish the stories, The 12 Gate Saga, Altering Two Lives and The Substitute Teacher Saga. And any others you haven't finished. But until then, we'll be waiting in the wings for that new chapter that says, I'm Back.

Hope to Hear Form you Again Soon!

Halloween Witch
Alex chapter 5 . 12/18/2010
Nova and Adrassi should get into a big fight over something (whatever you chose) and she blackmails her. In the end Adrassi tells the team. Some already know, some don't. Or a member finds out and blackmails Sprx and Nova. In the end the team will find the truth.

I'm not telling you how to write your story or anything, it was just a sugestion. If you do use this suggestion, please give a small amount a credit. Please.

Anyway, great story!
The Girl with Fuzzy Socks chapter 5 . 11/1/2010
Poor Chiro! I can't wait to see what will happen and what is behind the gates this time. As for the question, I think that Bee's option C would happen. It would be totally awesome to watch, especially if Mandarin was the poser XD
YaKkOxXxXAkKo chapter 5 . 10/27/2010
I am officially in love with your story! *hugz your story* As for the question of the chapter, I think that Sparks and Nova's secret should be revealed in the miggled of the entire escapade. Not this story but in the future. Just a suggestion. Make the next when you can!
HBee16 chapter 5 . 10/26/2010
Answer: It will probably be either-

a) at the very end of the series

b) after one of them gets almost REALLY killed

c) one of them almost gets won over by a bad guy/shapeshifter posing as a monkey trying to break them up then destroy them both.

I, for one, prefer Gibson's last name and do not care for mustaches. AND I LIVE IN MICHIGAN TOO, AND ALL WE GOT TODAY WAS A DUMB TORNADO DRILL DURING MY SCIENCE CLASS! I hope Savvy & Adrassi let Gibby keep his sanity until the others get back. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
Starfire 16 chapter 5 . 10/26/2010
I'M LOOKING FORWARD TO SEEING THE TEAM KICK SOME ZOMBIE BUTT! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
Halloween Witch chapter 5 . 10/26/2010
I have no idea about the Mary sue thing because I'm a Mainer and don't know that kind of stuff, and as for the question on Sprx and Nova, i think you should have it at the end of the story or the beginning of the next with them making out in some room and the Gibson walks in on them! That would be the best in my eyes!

As for the chapter, loved it! Can't wait for the next, and its so good to have a day off from work, right? I know it feels that way to me! Also, can't wait for the next Altering Two Lives chapter!

Halloween Witch
Halloween Witch chapter 4 . 10/16/2010
Quite a few questions to answer at the end of a AMAZING chapter!

Yes Desiree should go out with Otto, Yes she should get to kick Gibson's butt, and yes i thing she'd be great friends with Sprx, they both love to torment poor Mr. Hal Gibson.

Can't wait for the next chapter of not only this story, but 'Altering Two Lives' as well, get them up when you can, and i know how having everything pile you down in life keeps you from writing, its hammered me hard too, i haven't finished chapter 24 or 25 of 'Dawn of a New Era' yet because i was doing a English project and all my other homework, watching my brat of a brother, and some other stuff. I can't really remember what.

Do awesome and see ya soon Mikki!

Halloween Witch!
Starfire 16 chapter 4 . 10/16/2010
I've never been to B-Dubs either, so I guess I'm not human. If Xman wants a better chance at Adrassi, that was the totally wrong thing to say. D & Gibby really do need to grow up. NEXT CHAPTER: TIME TO SLAY SOME ZOMBIES!
HBee16 chapter 4 . 10/16/2010
AUUUUUUUGH! ZOMBIES EVERYWHERE! LET MANDY & THE BANES GET IN SO THEY CAN USE THEM AS BAIT!

Answers:

D and Otto? DEFINITELY!

D kicking Gibby's but? I'm with Savvy, they ARE immature.

D & Sparky as friends? Why not? They both like to annoy Gibby.

PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
HBee16 chapter 3 . 10/5/2010
I CAN'T DECIDE WHICH CHARACTER I'D LIKE TO MEET THE MOST! THEY'RE ALL SO AWESOME! XMAN & OTTO ARE ADORABLE, THE GIRLS ARE AWESOME, SPARKY & GIBBY ARE FUN TO MESS WITH, CHIRO'S FUN TO HANG WITH, & GABE NEEDS SOME ATTENTION! WHEN ASKED THAT QUESTION, I FEEL LIKE A TODDLER TOLD SHE CAN ONLY HAVE ONE PIECE OF HALLOWEEN CANDY! CAN I PICK THEM ALL? Ok, back to lowercase. Obviously Savvy's question didn't make D any less wary of Gibby. It's really cool how Gabe discovered he could control ice! BACK TO ALL CAPS! I CAN'T WAIT FOR THEM TO START KICKING DRAGON TAIL! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
Starfire 16 chapter 3 . 10/5/2010
Well Savvy's question sure as heck didn't help ease the tension between D and Gibby. It's cool that Gabe learned to do that. Next chappie, KICK THAT DRAGON'S TAIL! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
Halloween Witch chapter 3 . 10/5/2010
Awesome chap Mikki, as for the question, there is no way i could chose just one! I would have to meet all of them! One just wouldn't be enough, but if it was down to the wire chose or die, it would be Nova, she is my kind of girl!

I can't wait for the next chapter of this story and of 'Altering Two Lives' I love them both, I've already re-read that one chapter of 'Altering Two Lives' almost twenty times!

Halloween Witch!
HBee16 chapter 2 . 9/27/2010
To answer your first question, yes, you should put her bio up on your profile. Second, I think D and Gibby have a promising future as frenemies. Thirdly, OTTO'S GONNA HAVE A GIRLFRIEND! But now Gabe and Antauri are the only ones still single. Awwwwwww. :-( And they both really need girlfriends too. I'M LOVING THE STORY SO FAR! PLEASE UPDATE ASAP!
Starfire 16 chapter 2 . 9/27/2010
AAAAWWWWWWWW! OTTO'S SO CUTE! ESPECIALLY WHEN HE'S CRUSHING! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
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