|Reviews for Scheming Woman|
| ThatOneNerdInYourClass chapter 13 . 1/9
This book was soooo good! Sorry I didn't review on any of the other chapters but I just couldn't wait to read more! Definitely will read the sequel!
| ThatOneNerdInYourClass chapter 3 . 1/6
This is awesome! Just out of curiosity I looked up what sihirli kisi meant. I guess it's Turkish for something like magic being. I love how you looked that up!
| Danterevan chapter 14 . 12/23/2012
i loved it and i know they would be perfect together well done her character is a perfect fit to be merlins love intrest
| merlinandfreyaFTW chapter 13 . 5/8/2012
This beats all of Merlin's relationships, and she's not even real! *sigh* if only i read this before i made my username.i'm not generally into romance, but i liked this one, it wasn't all sappy ;)
| animeloveramy chapter 13 . 9/29/2011
this is really good, i swear. i cant wait to see the sequal (presuming its been written)
those two are damned cute, they really are ;)
| edwardfiend chapter 14 . 9/21/2011
| Ardent Apathy chapter 2 . 9/6/2011
So I know I'm still early on in the story, but so far, I love it. You've captured Arthur's and Merlin's relationship/relationshup perfectly. And They seem very in character.
And I love your OC(s)! So far- I could be wrong, but Xyla seems to be the "sweet yet manipulative type". And I like how bold she is- just voicing her thoughts to Merlin. Very nice!
Also, for constructive criticism, at the beginning of the 2nd chapter(when Merlin was apprehensive about the hunt), you wrote "He held no weapon Merlin here?" I think this may either be a typo, or I'm reading it incorrectly.
Anywho, your story is fabulous! And I just saw that you have a LONG sequel to go along with it. Awesome )
| princessmelia chapter 1 . 9/3/2011
I cannot tell you how many conversations happened exactly like that between my friends and I. Mostly me saying "Merlin's so adorable" then them harshing on his ears and me saying, "But those are the best part! It adds to his dorky cuteness!" Can't wait to read more!
| Mrs. Bonner chapter 14 . 8/8/2011
This was a fun story, and one of your first? Kudos - you did a great job.
| Mrs. Bonner chapter 9 . 8/8/2011
"Arthur tried not to gasp. He'd seen plenty of injuries before, of course, but somehow they all seemed worse on his manservant."
I love how these subtle, sweet lines so often appear in your writing. I love the Arthur in this story. You get him.
| Mrs. Bonner chapter 8 . 8/8/2011
I love how you end the chapter right when things are at the boiling point!
| Mrs. Bonner chapter 7 . 8/8/2011
My favorite thing about this chapter is the silent conversation, and the fact that girls get that sort of thing and guys are oblivious to it.
This story has good layers. There's the sweet young love developing, but there's a dark tension underneath, because of Xyla's evil plans and because she's witholding the truth from Merlin. It's all going to come to a head, isn't it?...
| Mrs. Bonner chapter 6 . 8/8/2011
I loved this chapter. I loved Arthur being understanding about Merlin having a girlfriend, and helping him out with a place to sleep. His actions speak "friend". I also love the way Merlin seemed to innocently float away after he left Xyla and her kiss. Very sweet. Takes me back a few years and makes me smile.
| Mrs. Bonner chapter 4 . 8/7/2011
This is a great chapter, Miss Kitty. I like the sleep-talking spell. Nicely done.
| Mrs. Bonner chapter 3 . 8/7/2011
"Feeling himself generous, Arthur decided to give Merlin until tonight, when he would expect his servant to once again be cheerful, helpful, and insulting. Or else."
That's such fun!
I like this chapter, and I like Xyla.