Reviews for Pretty Like a Doll
Turtlerma chapter 1 . 2/18
If Cheren and Alder had just peeked in. They would be so confused at what was happening inside.
They'd just be thinking, 'Have they forgotten what they came here for?'
julien chapter 1 . 11/10/2014
Great story but when you always say Innocent i kind of fell Pedophil D: lol man but no srsly great story
Cursed Tails chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
PLEASE CONTINU! It Is SOOOOOOO AWESOME
SapphiRubyCrys chapter 1 . 8/3/2014
Aww... that's so sweet. You made White sound like a pervert ;)
Guest chapter 1 . 7/10/2014
I LOVED IT! Make another one!
TomboyWriter chapter 1 . 6/29/2014
I like how you made White so jumpy XD And I like how you made N so innocent. I find it charming cute and sweet. 3 What I like about the people you can play as in Pokemon games is that you don't know their personality, making fanfiction easier and much more fun to make! But this is my favorite version of White! Great job, 11 out of 5 stars! XD
Diclonious57 chapter 1 . 2/17/2014
Sweeter than candy
Streaks of moonlight chapter 1 . 2/16/2014
I sense sexual tension

This was a good read! Although N was a tad bit too childish for me, I still enjoyed reading this side of him. But overall, you did fantasti b
frostruby chapter 1 . 1/25/2014
Yes, N is WAY to naive and innocent.
Kotonechan3 chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
Awwwwwwwwwww it's so cite and I actually loved his innocence
Jinseiwakurai-Shouganai chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
Awww! N is such a cutie!
white x n 123 chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
i loved it you should do another one
ReadWriteLove715 chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
God, N's innocence made me gush, giggle, and made me so happy! Sadly, I haven't played the game in quite a long time but reading this made me rekindle my memories of the amazing game. My love for Ferriswheelshipping grew again! So thank you and this story is definitely going into my favorites! :D
Mew'smeow chapter 1 . 3/17/2013
Eh. He seemed like he was raised in a castle as a child, without the internet (or fanfiction)! Yeah, now I feel really sorry for him. Just, sad. No effin internet! How could you live without it for a year? 0_o
Erika-moon chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Cute! I love this so much. I like how it's written so well. You did your best on this. I'm so happy. So cute! *Falls in happiness* Amazing job!
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