Reviews for Be There in TwentyDakotastew
Guest chapter 3 . 8/6/2012
Update u
JaneRocksHard chapter 3 . 2/12/2011
great story.
Eryk Lestrange chapter 3 . 1/29/2011
Twilight is the worst shit ever written, but this is okay

don't understand why it's rated M, though
imjustheretoreadthings chapter 3 . 11/16/2010
PLLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEEE
Bobbyjohn chapter 3 . 11/14/2010
I really like it, you're doing great
Neon Blur chapter 3 . 10/19/2010
This is cute! Kristen's day with Joan? They should jam. And talk about life in The Runaways...including Joan's "friendship" with Cherie ;)
lynettecullen chapter 3 . 10/11/2010
I hope that you update soon.

I really liked how Kristen noticed things in that chapter.
lynettecullen chapter 2 . 10/11/2010
I liked when she flushed her drugs.
lynettecullen chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
I LOVED the first chapter.

I really liked the story line.
elfspirit7 chapter 3 . 10/9/2010
AWESOME! Please update as soon as you can ,can't wait to read the next chapter XD!
opposingimitaion chapter 3 . 10/8/2010
Really good story :) just don't like the music you picked...not fussing on the music but she doesn't seem like a kind of "paramore" kinda person you know? But other then that continue :D
kimmie1995 chapter 3 . 10/8/2010
Yup, Definitely better (: there was a alot of more detail (:

Can't wait for the next chpt
kimmie1995 chapter 2 . 10/3/2010
You improved from the 1st chapter, You could make The chapters longer?

Plus detail is important. Like What was Kristen Wearing ? Different things.

But Other Than That, I LOVED it (: Kristen and Dakota are Awesome (:

Keep Up the awesome Writing :D
elfspirit7 chapter 2 . 10/3/2010
AWESOME! Please update as soon as you can, can't wait to readt he next chatper XD!
AliceCullenIsMyRockstar chapter 2 . 10/3/2010
yeah the story definatley did improve! I love Dakotastew continue :)
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