Reviews for Glitch
fox hunter chapter 7 . 11/24/2014
don't mind fox familiar she/he is just a bitch looking for attention and has no right to voice her opinion is such a rude manner, your story is amazing and id please love for u to continue it. ;)
Lilac chapter 1 . 10/29/2014
I really enjoyed this story. I thought it felt very in character, with the repeated antagonism and never backing down, twisted through with lust. It was well-written and fun. Wish there was more.

It certainly was a better read than the profile of the person who flamed you. I've never quite seen someone take themselves quite that seriously over fanfiction before.
The Fox Familiar chapter 2 . 7/24/2014
Well, you asked for feedback, so I am going to give you some.

Where to start? For one, both Megatron and Starscream are OOC and generally act like faggots, especially with Megatron's 'he has no right to open his legs!' proclamation, which, if uttered to a woman, would be absolutely unforgivable, but to a man it's suddenly hot. Of course, Megatron fucks every one of his soldiers like any good leader when he doesn't outright rape them.

Starscream is Suspender Striptease, or basically, a hooker in disguise that flirts with every other robot and Megatron doesn't want him to have his own free will when choosing someone else. That damn fucker! It's like Bella not choosing Edward!

Oh, that reminds me: your stories are like Twilight. Yeah, I went there. I can't wait to see what the sex scenes are like. Since you're a slash fangirl I assume you're going to write about throbbing penises, sticky sperm and deepthroat like never before.

Christ. You people are so predictable.

Looks like I already reviewed this shitfic. I'm not surprised. In any case, Starscream and Megatron honestly have better things to do, and if they all acted like this the Decepticons wouldn't even be scary. They'd just be a bunch of tranny pussies that can't fight worth a darn.

So, where's the deepthroat?
The Fox Familiar chapter 1 . 6/1/2014
What the fuck did I just read? And no, I don't care if this is your first time or not; this is public, YOU wrote it, you thought about it, and you posted it. Not to mention pornography is not allowed on this site, so it will be reported. Now, this. Why is Starscream always such a little bitch in these stories, and why is Megatron such a sick fuck rapist? I mean, come on. Can't you think of anything better to do than write bad slash?

Of course Starscream is an effeminate faggot, licking his lips and bending over like the whore that he is. What great military moral. In real life, Megatron would blast that fucker to the nearest moon, because he honestly does not have time for this shit.

Learn how to write characters in character, and maybe learn a thing or two about homosexuality. You certainly weren't created from that bonding, so take a reality pill and please fuck off.
Funsized chapter 7 . 10/18/2011
This story is my lubricant : I've read this atleast twice now :)

Please write more !
gaarasgrl19 chapter 7 . 9/18/2011
I would like screamer to break down and yell all the things that make him disobey to megatron.
r2mich2 chapter 7 . 9/11/2011
Lubricannnnnnttttt...

Heh, great story! Keep it up and update soon!
babblebuzz chapter 7 . 9/4/2011
XD okay l
Jalaperilo chapter 7 . 9/2/2011
Man, I was so happy when I saw this in my inbox. The dynamic between Megs and Screamer is still delicious, and there is still the frustration and antagonism between them, even after 'facing.

Keep up the great work!
Katea-Nui chapter 7 . 9/1/2011
lol, nice ending A/N there. Gotta say I have been waiting FOREVER for this to be updated DX Mean evil author! Then again you're writing a D-con story soooo... Can't wait for more XD
DemonSurfer chapter 7 . 9/1/2011
Well, it's nice to see Starscream finally gettin' some.

I love how this is a mutual romance between Starscream and Megatron, but both characters are very much IN character, at least in this early stage. Not something you often see in this kind of fic.

Hope to see the next chapter soon.
Kaisu chapter 6 . 8/6/2011
wow you have a fantastic way with words! The detail and the variety are very nice! The interaction between Meg and Star are exactly what I ever pictured, you have rounded them off very accurately! Can't wait for the next chappy:)
lolmech chapter 6 . 7/21/2011
Holy chizz! This fic is like a drug addiction that i just cant shake! Please update soon! Im dying to read more!
Integra87 chapter 6 . 7/20/2011
What a tease! Update soon please I cant wait to see whats gonna happen next! Star and Megatron argue so sweet, mmmmmm. I hope that when they finally do it its gonna be a looooooooong chapter. It better be or else :D
BumblebeesGirlMaddy chapter 6 . 7/19/2011
Update soon! xD I find this story highly interesting as the two dance around each other! It's quite a wonderful story so don't leave us hanging! :)

-Maddy
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