It’s been a few years; I hope that you continue with this! Very well written. I would like to see Bella confront her Mom, and also take Stephen and Laurent to trial. Waiting eagerly!

*squints at end note and years since update*
Hiiiii
Plllleeeease finish this wonderful story! You said it so close to done! I live in hope!

wow. please update soon!

I love this story. I just find myself not able to get over the fact that these adopted and biological children, who are siblings for all intents and purposes, are couples.

are you going finish the book

I've literally made an ffnet account so that I can comment on this incredible story. Your writing and story telling is magnificent, and I have read every single word of Torn in about 3 days (thanks for ruining my sleep lol ;)) I really hope that you continue with Torn, it is literally all I can currently think about haha! Although we all obviously under stand that RL is a bitch, and gets in the way :) And, happy 2025! 3

J'aime beaucoup ta fanfiction... dommage qu'elle soit abandonnée

Wow, what a ride it's been. I'd love to see the resolution of this story, but even if not, thank you for what you've shared so far.

Wow, that's some generational trauma along with a reveal that was well set up.

This story has been so intense in so many ways I've hardly wanted to put it down. I never thought a 650k story could feel so short!

That was such a powerful chapter. Though my past isn't nearly as horrific as Bella's, that first session especially reminded me of a lot of what I've worked through in therapy. This whole story so far has been such a beautiful example of loving restorative care. I don't know where all this came from in your life, but thank you for sharing it.

And I’m up to date. Hope all is good with you Dooba. Thanks for the story. X

Oh my god! Do you know how long I have waited for Bella to give Carlisle a hug! That poor man! This melted my heart.

Thank you!

I love how even in the dark places you still put in the odd line of dialogue that makes me chuckle.

Things like the exchange between Bella and Emmett whilst doing the crossword and Bella's comment that she doesn't deal with stuff, when talking to Edward.

I am genuinely in awe of the fact that you have written this story over so many years (not a criticism) and you haven't lost the feel of the story and the characters still feel so true to themselves.

I'm aware that I only have 14 chapters left and I don't know how resolved this story will be, but please know that I will wait for this story to be finished, if you're ever able to.

I know people asking can put pressure on writing and suck the fun out of just sitting down and putting pen to paper so to speak. There is always so much excitement when you post the first chapter of a fic - will people read it, what will they think. Then it gains traction and the next thing you know you have an audience and perceived pressure and expectations.

I hope all is well with you. x

Your writing is exceptional. Considering she gives herself so few words to work with, Bella few exchanges are always heartbreaking.

It was a few chapters back, but I loved when Bella kept the post-it note Carlisle gave her, for her Gym detention essay.

I have read so many chapters in a row and not left you any reviews which I feel truly awful about. I'm not sure if you are even still reading reviews.

I took a look through your favourites and was so surprised to see that my fic was there! I also see that you actually read it back in the day and left me a number of reviews. Thank you so much!

I am devouring this fic, but I'm also conscious that once I finish it all, then there'll be a hole, which I'll have to try and fill with another fic. I am loving Bella's progression and you have written possibly the sweetest Edward.

Thank you

Is there any chance we could have an update from you️