Reviews for Torn
Caitie126 chapter 3 . 10/6/2010
Wow! You do such a good job portraying Bella's anxiety and stress about moving into this new situation. I even teared up when I was reading this! keep up the good work!
nissu chapter 3 . 10/6/2010
This story is beginning to look interesting. Brings lot of emotions to the reader. Keep it coming :)
lozzy035 chapter 3 . 10/6/2010
poor bella she was so scared

atleast she knows she can cook

wow her foods wired

update soon
Lizzosaur chapter 2 . 10/2/2010
Told you you should continue.

;) Great chapter.
Tulipp chapter 2 . 9/30/2010
This is really lovely...that might seem like a strange word to use about a story in which every sentence vibrates with pain, but it's true. It seems like there are lots of people who take up the abuse storyline cavalierly, but you write this with such tenderness. I especially liked the repetition of Esme noticing...

Wonderful. I hope you continue.
Will4ever chapter 2 . 9/30/2010
I love i love it i love it! It is amazing, please tell me more about the plot. you can contact me on


lozzy035 chapter 2 . 9/30/2010
poor bella everything reminding her of bad times

wow she really cant be touched why not

update soon
dat panda bandit chapter 2 . 9/30/2010
this is so amazing!
UnoriginalThoughts chapter 2 . 9/30/2010
I thought this chapter was well written. I know you were concerned about 'getting into Bella's head' but it all fits with what you have written so far.

The relationship between Bella and Renee is well portrayed and interaction between other characters is good and it'll be interesting to see how it progresses.

Will be waiting patiently (or not so!) for the next chapter.
Rondnoir96 chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
I like where this has started.
lozzy035 chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
poor bella having that happen to her twice

update soon
Kiss007 chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
amazing start to a story! Please continue
Lizzosaur chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
I think you should continue.
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