|Reviews for Torn|
| applesollie chapter 81 . 2/25
This is a really great story so far.
| Guest chapter 42 . 2/23
| Guest chapter 42 . 2/23
Ooooooh Alice's reference to seeing the future!
| SissyCabella chapter 81 . 2/21
I LOVE this story! One of the BEST fanfics there is! I hope you will keep writing, as I am on the edge of my seat waiting!
| alyssalovesbooks chapter 20 . 2/20
Best fanfiction i have EVER read! Sequel, maybe?
| alyssalovesbooks chapter 42 . 2/19
| belleveloso chapter 81 . 2/18
| knb1223 chapter 1 . 2/18
I know those feelings... Thanks for writing this. I'll be reading it when I can. I really just need to get over the past already and a friend at this home (house?) thought reading this type of thing might help. Idk how, but I'll trust her I guess. You're a great writer by the way from what I've read so far. :) Sorry if that review was sort of depressing... I just wanted to say thanks :)
| 2legs2short chapter 81 . 2/16
awesome! more please :)
| Chanelvamp chapter 81 . 2/16
Another little baby step for Bella. I love the sweet interaction between her and Edward, seems like it is the thing that keeps her centered and she opens up more about her past to him, little things but things none the less.
Wonder what is up with Carlisle and the hospital, feels like something is brewing, or I am seeing things, lol. Good chapter ;-)
| I will be Dauntless chapter 81 . 2/14
Amazing writing and story would love to read more! Plz update ASAP!
| Guest chapter 81 . 2/13
This is honestly such a beautiful story. I normally dont like the Bella/Edward pairing but you've made Edward such a lovely character. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| claudia00 chapter 81 . 2/12
I'm a new reader of this perfect fanfiction.
Sorry that I didn't leave any review on the others chapters, I was too much involved in the story and just keep reading it.
I found this history exactly 10 days ago and since then I read it in every second of my time.
I just got to this chapter now and I wanted to leave a real review to tell you how this history of yours touched me my soul and my heart.
I don’t even find words to thank you for writing this amazing history. I can say that it marked my life and I’m not overacting.
This is amazing! You know how to write in such a natural way so that it looks like this is happening all around us. I really lived every moment, every thought, every pain that you wrote. And I lost count of how many times tears fell. And that showed how much it touched me.
Reading this help me in ways I think I never ever thought it was possible. I’m better now after passing 10 days in this world, after seeing so much and feeling everything. That made me understand things about me that I didn’t even know. I just want to hug Bella and be hugged by someone. I truly miss being hugged, I don’t remember the last time someone just hugged me.
I can’t say I understand what Bella went through because (thank god) I didn’t went through that, but read about it here made me feel her pain as my own. And in some situations I became her and she became me, I saw me reacting like her before it even occurs, it was unbelievable.
And then some situations remembered me in my real life and made me see me in other way too so thank you.
I really want to leave a good review for you but I’m sorry, I can’t find a way to show you or to describe you how grateful I am for putting this story and this characters in my life. They are part of me now.
Thank you so much.
And sorry if this has parts that don’t make sense. English isn’t my native language but I did the best that I could.
| Irish Charm chapter 81 . 2/10
Bella is really starting to see the bigger picture. While she may not do it for herself, there is no way that Bella is going to allow someone else to be hurt the way she was.
| letsjustdance chapter 81 . 2/10
Awww...this ended sweetly, if sadly, but I'm glad she lets him in. It is odd she'll be vulnerable, asleep, in bed with him, though, and won't be comfortable through a locked bathroom door, awake, taking a shower. I guess it's just the way our body and mind reacts to anxiety, abuse, etc. Love Wisp, so cute. :) I hope the girls aren't upset that she didn't watch Pretty Woman with them, after all. I guess she forgot. I do wonder what's going on with Carlisle. *hugs*