Reviews for Torn
Guest chapter 17 . 1/6
Wow...i liked alices pov.
L. Lee Anderson chapter 87 . 1/5
Oh my gosh...how did I already read 87 chapters of this? It flew by way too quick! I love this plot and your writing style. Magnificent! If I didn't know any better I'd think English was your first language! But anyway ugh you need to update! Its been a month and a half...I need more. I know there's gonna be something with James and goodness you made Victoria into a semi decent character. I thought for sure that you were going to name Bella's mom Victoria...oooh maybe you still will! Somehow I think she's going to reemerge into the story and we are all going to want to punch her in the face. I've heard of horse therapy a little but I'm curious to see how you build on that. Anyways, update soon!
Guest chapter 87 . 1/5
Update pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease! you are killing me.
Guest chapter 87 . 1/5
pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease, i'm begging you update as soon as you can! you're killing me here :(

this story is so great, i can even start to describe!
el chapter 4 . 1/4
Ok i had to read afew chapter before i review. This is awesome. The way edward entered the fic was unexpected. See i have read a lot of fics and i can often predict what will happen but this one was new. Gonna read more now.
MissMegan24 chapter 87 . 1/3
Wow, what an amazing adventure you've created here. Very intricate story, and you are covering such tense situations and emotions with grace. What a journey you must have been on, to write this.
Spawn chapter 1 . 1/2
Happy New Year! I'm hoping to see more of this story in the new year.
blb1000 chapter 87 . 1/2
Prob not the reaction he was hoping for.
blb1000 chapter 85 . 1/2
I did a day course with horses a few years ago. I experienced the change you describe here when your attention wanders from them.
melliott829 chapter 87 . 1/2
omg I love it! please update
blb1000 chapter 83 . 1/1
Oh no.
blb1000 chapter 82 . 1/1
Hmmm, interesting...
blb1000 chapter 78 . 12/31/2015
The Cullens could split up their land among them and dominate the coast!
blb1000 chapter 77 . 12/31/2015
He's crafty, but she's not buying.
blb1000 chapter 76 . 12/31/2015
Ha! Good choice.
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