Reviews for Torn |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I left and returned to this story. I’ve really enjoyed, but was left confused in a couple places. You early on Bella was in Arizona, but in later chapters it’s Florida. And I swear Emmett and Rose were accepted to UW in Seattle in one chapter, but later you put UCLA. Otherwise, it’s an amazing story. |
![]() ![]() When will there be a new chapter? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for the peek into Helen's diaryhow sad and tragiclooking forward to the next chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've been following this for years, I'm so glad your still posting updates and I can't wait for the next one. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wondered who the car might belong to... I hope he is still locked up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I would love a nice swaying hug from Edward! lol! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This chapter was simply lovely! I can see why you love it too! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the progress Bella keeps making. And Iblove thebwaybher connections with each of the Cullens is growing too... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just want to say how much I am enjoying this story! I can hardly put it down! I love how the characters are developing and how Bella is growing and changing. I can feel her struggle with learning to reframe her entire life. I cant wait to see how it continues to unfold! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hiya there! I have been addicted to this story since I found it a few weeks ago. I love how well explained is the recuperating process of Bella, although I am always looking forward to reading good news for her. Thank you so much for sharing and keep writing this story... I appreciate it and loved every hour I spent happily reading it. The writingjs great and I absolutely love the relationship between Esme and Bella, it took ages but when she decided to open up it brough a lot of confort for her! Hope you are fine and whenever you can you upload another chapter! |
![]() ![]() Thank you for writing this story. It's the best fanfiction I've ever read - very well-written and empathetic. |
![]() ![]() encontre esta historia hace poco, y no he podido parar de leerla, por favor dime que no la dejaras |
![]() ![]() ![]() I absolutely love this story and the time and details you put into it. I have actually been rereading it and keep finding things I missed the first time. I really hope you continue. This is an incredible story. |
![]() ![]() I'm sure you hear this all the time, please please finish this story.i made myself read this super slow in hopes you would complete it by the time i finished. This is such a good story, keep writing its something you are really talented at. I just can't wait for more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a sad, hopeful and beautiful story. I hope you continue with it. |