love these two

love and love some more these children

Sweet young love

That is cuteness overloadedI love these 2 sm-

Very sweet! I love this story!

This was a great story from start to finish! I loved it!

This was a very nice way to end this delightful story. You gave us a little heart failure having Bella not trust in her boy after all these years but in the end it was a sweet ending. I like Edward mentioned, thought he'd propose under their tree since it was very central to the story but having him climb the infamous tree was good too.
I want to thank you for keeping your work here so we can still read and enjoy your lovely stories. This one made my heart happy and boy in these days an escape like this is very much appreciated.

I've loved Edward's POV but of course it would be great getting Bella's. I also wish we could have gotten more of Emmett but he's in college now but still I'd like some family characters to step into the story but alas it seems this story was written and completed a long time ago and there are only a few more chapters. I do wish you were still writing fan fiction because you tell delightful stories that make you really 'feel' all the emotions with the characters.

Bravo to Bella that she finally stood up for herself when told she was moving to Florida without even it being discussed. I always wondered why Charlie didn't step up and get more time with Bella and now we know why, Renee is not a good mom if she's taken Bella's dad away from her all this time with lying about it. I'm so happy for these two that they'll be able to have a normal relationship now.

This was a brillant chapter. I've read a lot of "firsts" but this one was right up there in the top spot. Beside the innocence of them finally having sex which totally came through, I appreciated that this Edward was so in tune to his Bella's feelings, physically and emotionally instead of just getting the deed done and his happy ending. Oh if all firsts were this satisfying for both people. Edward is a perfect young man and he ought to be proud of himself showing his girl so much love and pleasure. I just imagine how could he's going to be with some practice. lol

Poor Edward missing his girl to distraction. Like he feels for Bella, that she shouldn't put her dreams aside and putting her mother's needs first, he ought not put his dreams aside of Stanford for the sake of being close to Bella. I'm hoping that with Renee and Phil's budding romance Renee will ship Bella off to Forks so she can follow him around. Let's hope the person at the end of this chapter calling out Edward's name is in fact Bella surprising him by being there early?

This was such a beautiful chapter. Edward sneaking out of his house, climbing the tree, taking the chance of getting caught by Charlie and his guns...and then the 16th mutual birthday breakfast given by the excited Alice...and finally Edward driving his girl on their first date and exchanging meaningful gifts...and let's not forget their exploring each other in their first sexual explorations. Oh youth. This story gives me all the sweetest feels. Love it.

Well if this Edward was modeled by any parts of your husband, you are a very lucky woman. Now to these two teens...Bella's admission about being the parent to her mother is very sad. Renee needs to worry less about Bella being stuck in Forks like she once felt and more about what living with her is doing to the poor girl. I think Bella ought to talk honestly with her dad about the situation meaning ask why he doesn't ask for Bella's presence in his life more, like staying longer in the summers at least. I mean she comes all that way just for a few weeks and then she's stuck with Charlie camping when she really would rather do more teen like things.

How sweet that your husband gave you insight into what it's like being a hormonal boy. It's actually so sweet and lovely to see a young Edward coming of age in such a pure an innocent manner. You've captured something so special between these two. I'm glad they are able to be open an honest about their feelings and how they've been growing and changing much like their own bodies.

This young Jasper is perfect for this story. I'm so glad Edward stepped up to the plate and left the 'bad' boys behind and stayed true to himself and gained a great friend in Jasper that even Bella likes.