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Fucking fantastic fic

Loved this sweet story. Thank you for sharing it!

what a wonderful wonderful mushy sexy sweet perfect story - one of the best *we grew up together* fics I've ever read - the pacing was perfect, you kept the tone consistent throughout, they were silly and sweet and their kid-voices were just right - thank you!

Aww this story is sooooo sweet, I love it!p

Great story but way too short!(

Wow. Just, wow. This is a beautiful love story from beginning to end. Beautifully written. I hope to see much more from you. There was the right balance of passion and mild angst. I mean, come on, you can't have a love story without a little one is going in my favorites list. Bravo.

I loved this chapter so much. Alice and Bella collaborating on a story about vampires and werewolves! Cute. And Edward thinking sparkling vampires was odd was priceless! If you haven't already read it you should read Sparkle Boy by 's a one shot about the meadow scene. I like the sparkles.I am loving the characters in your story. This is such a sweet story.

Oh my goodness. I said I wouldn't review on each chapter, but I had to on this one. This one touches my heart in ways I can't put into words. The way you have written the relationship between these two children is beautiful. I am actually in tears.

I am a relatively newcomer to fanfiction, under a year, and I am so hooked. But this story...OMG... I've only read 1and 1/2 chapters so far... and I am so in love! I can so easily picture little Bella sitting under that tree, her big brown eyes filled with tears. And then her missing tooth smile when she throws her arms around little Edwards neck. My heart breaks for these two little characters! You had me captured with the second paragraph! I know that the rest of the story will be awesome as well. I won't review on each chapter, but I will occasionally. Wonderful story telling so far.

I was a bit dramatic like Edward...

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Beautiful story...I loved every word.