|Reviews for Dark Times|
| Neil chapter 41 . 7/30
Now she is a master sword user as well? are you fucking kidding me?! Forget it, I am done here. Just kept getting more and more idiotic, and the SAME SPELLING MISTAKES over and over for pages.
| Guest chapter 35 . 7/29
Ok, honest question...How the hell did you make it 35 chapters through this and still have such a bad grasp of spelling? The word is half not haft. follow not fallow.
| Neil chapter 9 . 7/29
Not a bad story so far, it's just that it seems to be progressing... overly fast (9 chapters and H and Draco are Bf and Gf now?) Also, could do without the spelling mistakes and incorrect word uses (wipe instead of whip for example).
| shazarakk chapter 1 . 7/17
I'm sorry, I couldn't make it past the first few chapters, all I can say is this, learn how to fucking write.
| Azaira chapter 8 . 7/16
Why would Riddle allow her to be tortured, especially so terribly, if he wants her as his wife? That seems counterproductive, and there are far better ways to persuade someone to do something than physically.
| Azaira chapter 7 . 7/16
It's a good plot.
Grammar needs lots of work.
Lots of various spelling issues (i.e. 'robs' needs to be 'robes'...)
A character says something, then another repeats it? Needs fixing too.
| HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 49 . 3/6
I enjoyed this story immensely, but it should definitely be spell checked and proofread by more than one person. This story is riddled with errors and there were moments when I would have to read a sentence multiple times to figure out what a word was intended to mean because there were several words that we just flat used incorrectly.
| James351 chapter 49 . 2/18
I love this story so sad that it has to end
| Guest chapter 49 . 2/9
This is sirus-ly the best story ever fan made that exists
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/8
I like it I could see this becoming a book and possibly a film keep it going
| greasy snivellus chapter 4 . 12/23/2016
want me to review your old chapters to remove typos and stuff, correct grammar, etc.? pm me if you're interested
| bluestorm28 chapter 49 . 12/13/2016
I only came across this story thanks to a friend who mentioned it to me the other day and I have to say this story is one of the best ordinary (non crossover) harry potter stories I have read so far. I loved all the different twists and turns throughout from the start all the way to the end including how you brought Grindelwald into the story but my favourite thing out of the entire story is how you brought draco and Harry oops sorry Dawn Potter together into a relationship it was perfect.
| 8465338DeleteAccount chapter 49 . 11/23/2016
This was a great I enjoy reading it so thank you for writing it. I have to ask what happens to Dursley after they saw Dawn on TV.
| Tatieyana chapter 49 . 8/25/2016
This was a reread for me and got to say I loved it just as much the 2nd time around as the first. Really I can't say I dislike any of your stories but this is one is my fav.
| EmiJinx chapter 16 . 8/12/2016
I'm loving the story so far, but plz, it's FOLLOW not fallow and it's GLAD not glade. Mistakes in English are common, especially if it's not your native language, but please check that it's the right spelling (using a dictionary or so). I also struggle with English as I'm French, but with some help of friends and a dictionary, I've managed.
Besides that, I can see your style developing into something beautiful.
Keep on writing,