Reviews for Past, Present, Future
setokayba2n chapter 61 . 2/21
Not a bad story, it had his ups and down but it was good.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/22
Guest chapter 61 . 12/25/2017
Read through this entire story again.

It really, really, really needs someone to go over it and fix all the grammar/spelling mistakes because they make it rather hard to read and follow (it's not fallow for the love of god...). It can really take you out of the story when you encounter so many mistakes.
Serena530 chapter 1 . 7/18/2017
Just reread this story again and I still love it. The plot and the details. Great peace of work.
I'm also still hoping for a prequel to see how the Grim Reapers came to be with details on all the training, how they became friends, how the couples were formed, and everybody's reactions to everything. All of it before they were sent back to the past.
Anyway, once again it's a great story. :)
SarahOlivier chapter 54 . 6/9/2017
Dude not Did. Please find the spelling mistakes.
SarahOlivier chapter 53 . 6/9/2017
Raped* Rapiest*
SarahOlivier chapter 27 . 6/4/2017
You said that Harry is Playing beater than he said playing seeker
SarahOlivier chapter 14 . 6/2/2017
Why would Harry talk about himself in third person.
SarahOlivier chapter 13 . 6/2/2017
Why would Sirius want to punch James?
SarahOlivier chapter 8 . 6/1/2017
How did Demeter get the book?
HarryPotterFangirl85 chapter 61 . 6/1/2017
I enjoyed this story, but as other have pointed out BC,Sr. was previously put in azakban (can't remember how to spell it off the top of my head), then later he was still a judge at the tournament. BC, Jr. was given a kiss, but later escaped. Lastly, I have not seen anybody pointing out the fact that HP was Sirius' heir because he could not have children due to a spell he was hit with during the first war, but he's a father in the last chapter of the story. All in all, I enjoyed it. Thanks.
Eagle-Eyes chapter 61 . 3/25/2017
Wonderful story...

Immensely enjoyed it...

Spelling and grammar could use some work, but I'm from the US and don't know where you are from ,,. Great work

Keep writing as life allows
dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 3/3/2017
Interesting chapter and plot and amazing idea
Guest chapter 61 . 11/18/2016
Thank you for the awesome story. Was definitely one helluva ride. :-)
Guest chapter 53 . 7/7/2016
The amount of spelling and grammar mistakes in this is almost unbearable.

Going to try to soldier through it but man, this really needs beta'd and proofread.
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