|Reviews for Past, Present, Future|
| KaggyAlucardSesh chapter 61 . 3/6
umm what happened to draco?
| musical249 chapter 61 . 2/27
umm at the end you forgot to mention what happened to draco...
| brnkofeternity06 chapter 53 . 2/8
Okay I seriously love the story, the plot, and everything except for one thing... Your GRAMMAR! It seriously kills me. I don't understand how it is that you can't take a moment to correct a chapter before posting it. You surprise me at every turn and for the most part I can ignore it but geez! The spelling needs to be corrected with a red pen. Please fix this.
On another note, I'm so glad that you're totally sticking it to the Dursely's! Lol
| Lollypops101 chapter 61 . 1/8
| Zelda Ray chapter 61 . 1/7
Loved the story the only thing that through me off it was the spelling, grammar, etc. mistakes.
| Nova chapter 61 . 11/18/2013
| Silver Flyer chapter 61 . 10/24/2013
Loved, absolutely loved, this story. You're a good writer. I hope you continue to write stories.
| Guest chapter 61 . 9/2/2013
I liked the story, however you really need to have someone review your work, I think in one chapter you said you didn't have a beta anymore which means someone had to have caught the spelling mistakes before you started posting the chapters that were not beta'd. It was a frustrating to try to read when your words were not the right ones.
Such as when you wrote wonder with "wounder" they aren't the same.
| Guest chapter 61 . 8/31/2013
Hello, I liked the plot on your story very much, I would have liked to know what Draco, Demeter, the elder Potters, Mia, and Rose do though...
Also you should have given a little bit of background on the rest of the Time travelers and what they do now (the other Order members)
| Mari Wollsch chapter 61 . 8/15/2013
great, amazing story, loved it xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
| Mah1 chapter 61 . 7/19/2013
THIS STORY IS AWESOME !
| cjfjsjs chapter 53 . 7/12/2013
just when im about to abandon this story, it gets a million times better. omg. i cant.
| rosepetal21 chapter 61 . 7/6/2013
This story took quite a few days to finish, but it was really good with lots of excitement and quite a few twists and turns in the story. You did a really good job with the plot line. Loved it. Hope to see some more of your story's soon. :)
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| Cplehg chapter 61 . 4/2/2013
Hello there! I would just like to congratulate you for a job greatly done on creating one of the most amazing stories that I have ever read. I also want to thank you for taking a lot of your life into writing this and contributing to the world of the Harry Potter fandom. I liked your plot very much and I must say though, that I don't usually take the time to give a reviewon the stories that I've read- except for those that I really like. But even though I think of your story as great, some others may not, those others being grammar nazis. I myself stop reading a story that has a really nice plot once I notice that it has too many gramammatical errors for my brain to endure. It may make me sound a little pompous but that's just how it is. As you may very well know grammar is something that every author should always have on his/her mind. So it is unfortunate for me to say that you have not done a great job on that. I noticed a little too many grammatical errors while reading your story. Some are verb tense and punctuating errors, but what irked me the most are the spelling mistakes. Please don't be offended, but some of those are of words that have simple spellings, and well, it made me wonder if English is your first language. Thus, if you still have the time, please edit the story and correct such mistakes to further improve it. Who knows, it might just get you a lot of readers.