Reviews for Past, Present, Future
grurple chapter 61 . 3/29
One of the best stories ever! So cool, love it! So sad it ended...
RavenLilyLuna chapter 61 . 3/17
i loved your story man
KaggyAlucardSesh chapter 61 . 3/6
umm what happened to draco?
musical249 chapter 61 . 2/27
umm at the end you forgot to mention what happened to draco...
brnkofeternity06 chapter 53 . 2/8
Okay I seriously love the story, the plot, and everything except for one thing... Your GRAMMAR! It seriously kills me. I don't understand how it is that you can't take a moment to correct a chapter before posting it. You surprise me at every turn and for the most part I can ignore it but geez! The spelling needs to be corrected with a red pen. Please fix this.
On another note, I'm so glad that you're totally sticking it to the Dursely's! Lol
Lollypops101 chapter 61 . 1/8
good story!
Zelda Ray chapter 61 . 1/7
Loved the story the only thing that through me off it was the spelling, grammar, etc. mistakes.
Nova chapter 61 . 11/18/2013
Truly enjoyed
Silver Flyer chapter 61 . 10/24/2013
Loved, absolutely loved, this story. You're a good writer. I hope you continue to write stories.
Guest chapter 61 . 9/2/2013
I liked the story, however you really need to have someone review your work, I think in one chapter you said you didn't have a beta anymore which means someone had to have caught the spelling mistakes before you started posting the chapters that were not beta'd. It was a frustrating to try to read when your words were not the right ones.
Such as when you wrote wonder with "wounder" they aren't the same.
Guest chapter 61 . 8/31/2013
Hello, I liked the plot on your story very much, I would have liked to know what Draco, Demeter, the elder Potters, Mia, and Rose do though...
Also you should have given a little bit of background on the rest of the Time travelers and what they do now (the other Order members)
Mari Wollsch chapter 61 . 8/15/2013
great, amazing story, loved it xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Mah1 chapter 61 . 7/19/2013
THIS STORY IS AWESOME !
cjfjsjs chapter 53 . 7/12/2013
just when im about to abandon this story, it gets a million times better. omg. i cant.
rosepetal21 chapter 61 . 7/6/2013
This story took quite a few days to finish, but it was really good with lots of excitement and quite a few twists and turns in the story. You did a really good job with the plot line. Loved it. Hope to see some more of your story's soon. :)
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