Reviews for Past, Present, Future
kitty chapter 39 . 6/24
You named Harry's dog Zeus and them later you called him Jupiter?
Greekmytholgy chapter 9 . 6/6
SarahOlivier chapter 39 . 12/14/2014
James and Lily are so rude, immature and mean, especially with Harry and Mia. it's obvious that Rose and Demeter are the favorites
SarahOlivier chapter 38 . 12/14/2014
Lily shouldn't have listened in their conversation
KnightStrider49 chapter 61 . 8/17/2014
The story was awesome mate! My only complaint was that half the worlds were spelt incorrectly but you did well for the most part. Some parts in the story also did contradict one another (e.g. Barty Crouch Jr. given the kiss and father sent to askaban when later you said Jr. escaped and his father was at the tournament) that kinda happened a few times but I must admit, I mostly ignored it (the story line made up for it). All in all, awesome work mate! :D
narutofan'til'I'die chapter 61 . 7/27/2014
I absolutely love this story and it is one of my all time favorites as well !*_*
You're a really good author. ;)
dawn chapter 27 . 6/24/2014
Hi, I just wanna say that you have a very great story here. The plot is quite amazing, but you see, there's just one thing that I think you need to work on, it's the spelling. Wrong spelling sure does ruin the mood while reading.
Anyhow, great job with the story, just mind the spelling next time...
grurple chapter 61 . 3/29/2014
One of the best stories ever! So cool, love it! So sad it ended...
RavenLilyLuna chapter 61 . 3/17/2014
i loved your story man
KaggyAlucardSesh chapter 61 . 3/6/2014
umm what happened to draco?
musical249 chapter 61 . 2/27/2014
umm at the end you forgot to mention what happened to draco...
brnkofeternity06 chapter 53 . 2/8/2014
Okay I seriously love the story, the plot, and everything except for one thing... Your GRAMMAR! It seriously kills me. I don't understand how it is that you can't take a moment to correct a chapter before posting it. You surprise me at every turn and for the most part I can ignore it but geez! The spelling needs to be corrected with a red pen. Please fix this.
On another note, I'm so glad that you're totally sticking it to the Dursely's! Lol
Lollypops101 chapter 61 . 1/8/2014
good story!
Zelda Ray chapter 61 . 1/7/2014
Loved the story the only thing that through me off it was the spelling, grammar, etc. mistakes.
Nova chapter 61 . 11/18/2013
Truly enjoyed
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