Reviews for With a Little Help From My Friends |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I did a reread. I really wish you had been able to continue this story. it's truly interesting and intriguing. Harry will be remarkably trained, though he will not have friends his age. I wonder if those at school who will be in danger through the years will survive without him there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is such a briliant story. Was there a reason you stopped writing? It's a pleasure to read well plotted stories using proper grammar and correct spelling. Perhaps you could revisit "A Little Help" and update? Thank |
![]() ![]() ![]() very nicely started. |
![]() ![]() miss you |
![]() ![]() Pleaaasseee continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE (sarcastic eye roll) when an author states she / he has abandoned their stories but start another one and abandon that one as well |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant story, have you considered a sequel or extending this story with some interaction between Harry and the parties mentioned. I assume that some application of time manipulation would be required. |
![]() ![]() This is an excellent beginning I'd love to read the rest of it! Sending thoughts of good health to you and yours, and chocolate for your muse. |
![]() ![]() I know I'm very late to the party. I'm also not sure if I've commented before. I did mark the story as Harry gets a new guardian-Bill. I'd love to see Harry friends with Neville plus most everyone else except Ron Hermione Ginny. With tutors or a school in another country. Maybe combine ideas into a small school with Neville and some others as students with Harry. AND "creatures" as teachers and other students. |
![]() ![]() No Hogwards and Harry. Sure. Dumbledores hands are looking for more powers there. Please write, that Harry will studing on the special school in the Elves forests city, or with goblenes. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. What a wonderful and powerful beginning. I am sad that you were unable to continue. |
![]() ![]() Wow Great story! Keep up your writing , is very engaging |
![]() ![]() This is an excellent beginning! Thanks for the "taste" but I'm sending chocolate for your muse just in case. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’ve read a couple of your other works, and I was a little surprised at the shortness of this. It would’ve been nice to see what actually happened to Albus, Cornelius and the rest…. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Just found this story. The premise is very interesting. I notice it hasn't been updated in 10 years so I don't know if you are still actively writing or not. If you are still writing I hope you continue this story at some point. If you are not writing anymore, perhaps some other writer could be given permission to finish it. The beginning has such promise and I know from reading "You Broke Him, You Fix Him" that you are a very good writer that I know I would enjoy the continuation of this story. Thank you such a wonderful beginning. |