Reviews for The 14th World
Featherflight chapter 7 . 10/31/2010
Not bad, Sean. A little confusing.
Featherflight100698 chapter 6 . 10/22/2010
Ok then.
Featherflight100698 chapter 3 . 10/22/2010
"OH MY GOSH! STUFF!" that sounds like something i would do :3
Featherflight100698 chapter 2 . 10/22/2010
ok, i may not understand final fantasy AT ALL. but i guess it's good so far. *shrugs*
ENIGMA-doku chapter 2 . 10/10/2010
Good story so far.

Do you know who the guy on the cover is?
BrandonKHedgeflare chapter 5 . 10/9/2010
Is hunter by any chance Duke? If so then I better have the honor of beating the crap out of him, i've only ever hated one person and thats it! But anyway the story is good and the action moves it along quickly, but sometimes its hard to follow, maybe you could try taking thing a little slower and adding more description.
Featherflight chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
Don't get your hopes down, Bro! Someone else will review eventually! :) SMILEY FACE! :) :) :) :) :) :) :D :D :D :D :D :D :D ) yay for motivation!
BrandonKHedgeflare chapter 4 . 10/1/2010
This is my favorite chapter, so far, the characters are starting to develop and so is the plot!
BrandonKHedgeflare chapter 3 . 9/29/2010
I WAZ HUNGRY! Ok this is a good chapter and dont take this the wrong way but I think its a little lacking on that story that just sucks you in. Its not boring it just doesn't really just grab my attention
BrandonKHedgeflare chapter 2 . 9/29/2010
Y am I such a worrywort