|Reviews for Mass Effect: Grunt Sticks It In|
| CharNobyl chapter 1 . 5/13/2011
Not bad. Interesting premise, and some good humor to boot. I particularly liked Thane's segment. Probably my primary criticism would be the use of present tense. Most narratives are written in past, and I suppose I've just grown used to them to the point that it sounds weird when they aren't.
Oh well. A solid story nonetheless.
| GhastDream chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
hilarious, more please!
| Rosethorn chapter 1 . 2/26/2011
Wow... I love it when the whole team goes on a mission together and now the illusive mans there.
| S058 chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
Well, this is going to be a... interesting loyalty mission. Why on Earth is He there anyway?
| Vect the Atoner chapter 1 . 1/26/2011
Ah, the Illusive Man: Most Wanted Man by both the Alliance and the Ladies.
If only the actual mission was this involved. Hell, the actual mission could have been shorter if Shepard shot Morinth the moment she approached her (it's not like it's unusual in Omega and Aria pretty much told her "You've got permission to kill her").
Anyways I do love how all the squad members fulfill a role in some way, or at least do something fun. It'll be great to see Morinth and Grunt together (does he even know about the "Birds and the Bees" or whatever the Krogan equivalent is?)
| HyperionTheWatcher chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
I'm not sure exactly what just happened, but I'm fairly certain that's its a good thing. Dear god, do I pray to see more of this.
| Quincy80 chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
That is awesome. Call Bioware and see if they'll let you do some writing for ME3.
| mike chapter 1 . 11/3/2010
lol keep going its bloody funny
| ByLanternLight chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
...This is genius. Hilarious. Impossible. Drunk Tali, Garrus playing Motown on the earpiece,(Someone read all the Shadow Broker files, huh?) spot-on characterization of the rest of the cast, and a 'plot' that actually looks to be going somewhere. Comedy /gold/. 5/5.
| XxXTwilight-SinXxX chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
I laughed so hard I almost peed myself. Everything was just...Godly
| FarmerKyle chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
Love it! This is just hillarious! I liked drunk Tali, she's funny. Mordin tending the bar was also funny but not unexpected, for the single reason that sings 'Salarian Scientist' and anything else out there in left field seems plausible, but very funny all the same. Jack and Zaeed starting a gang war? Priceless. The Illusive Man? That was a sucker punch and I can't wait to find out why he is there.
| The Tomohawk chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
So far so good, I like how you rip on Samara's loyalty mission while at the exact same time keeping it funny enough so as not to come off as harsh, the bit with Miranda and her discovery of what the Illusive Man was doing being compared with the Santa Claus thing cracked me up. This story earned a favorite from me, and I'm already looking forward to an update of it.
PS: What's with the way you censor swears, it just seems kind of distracting more than anything.
| Moranth chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
There is not enough Grunt-centric fic around.
This is was pretty. Good job!
Though my favorite line had to be this one:
"Papa Hotel, this is Chocolate Thunder." XD
| Cactusmilkshake chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
Oh, this is brilliant!
I knew I had to fave before I even got to the title introduction xD. I love seeing the team work together.
Also, my fave line: "Much like an oncoming storm or the answer to the question that no one asked, Miranda Lawson enters the room much like she entered her life; completely uninvited and questioning her every action."
So. Very. Miranda.
| Dark Knight Gafgar chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
(Also, TIM really should've been playable in ME2. Hopefully he'll be on the team in the third game.)