Reviews for Open Hearts
jbadillodavila chapter 1 . 7/11/2017
Genial nmu
twlightbella chapter 2 . 8/8/2016
So sad Olivia lost her parents
twlightbella chapter 1 . 8/8/2016
Oh no
Remee chapter 4 . 2/28/2014
Are you planning on finishing this fic. I really like the plot.
ThroughTheAshes chapter 4 . 5/10/2011
I'm likeing this. Please try and update :)
mathisson chapter 2 . 1/2/2011
Oh my god...

Seriously good story

I have stinking tears in my eyes
IBACULLEN chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
dreamiedreamer chapter 4 . 12/3/2010
Gosh it must be a completely culture shock and life altering from free and single to looking after a baby. Great start. Look forward to read more.
Nissa-Cullen chapter 4 . 12/2/2010
I think you did good with the poop incident. At least Olivia is a girl and they don't have to worry about her peeing on them. My son did that all the time. It was hilarious the first time I fed him spegetti I forgot to take off his really nice onezie, so needless to say it was completely stained after the first bite. I hope Bella gets rid of Mike soon. What a jerk.
cheermom13 chapter 4 . 11/30/2010
looking forward to another chapter
Pollypoops chapter 4 . 11/30/2010
I've babysat before and got poop on the upholstered couch.

The parents were surprisingly okay with it, apparently it wasn't the first time!

Great chapter, can't wait for the next!
Pollypoops chapter 3 . 11/30/2010
Wonderfully poignant chapter, I'm very impressed :D

Very sorry to hear about your husband, but I'm glad he's okay!
Pollypoops chapter 2 . 11/30/2010

Poor Demetri and Tanya!
Pollypoops chapter 1 . 11/30/2010
Great first chapter!

The only small tiny thing wrong, was at one point you said:

"Bella asked, shifting Caroline onto her hip."


Heehee, don't sweat it, we all make mistakes! Just thought I'd mention it just in case :)

But otherwise, really, a fantastic first chapter!
OnceAWildcatAlwaysAWildcat chapter 4 . 11/29/2010
I love this story! Update!
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