Reviews for Not Everything is Right
jojobear33 chapter 15 . 7/8/2011
she needs to tell edward
I'm Not Kira chapter 15 . 7/8/2011
This story is so emotional and dramatic it''s.. contiune writing for all our sakes.


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jemmamaree chapter 15 . 7/8/2011
Loved it and cant wait for the next chapter!
jojobear33 chapter 14 . 7/2/2011
oh no! wats she gonna do?
polkadots chapter 14 . 7/1/2011
ugh! why did you end it there at such a good spot :o please update soon please such a good story please udate soon!
Cullen-Tea-Party chapter 14 . 7/1/2011
Please continue
boredandmoody chapter 13 . 6/24/2011
Honestly, I think that she has no right to feel jealous or mad at the fact that Edward has a girlfriend. She was the one that broke up with him for reasons that were simply insecurities. She didn't even know if he loved her or not. Good story though! :D
jojobear33 chapter 13 . 6/24/2011
this really made me mad.

none of the reasons she broke up with him

made sense.

I love the story but this really made me mad D:
jojobear33 chapter 12 . 6/22/2011
jojobear33 chapter 11 . 5/25/2011
ohno! where is Alice! D:
BerryEbilBunny chapter 11 . 5/10/2011
The best type of writing comes from the experiences of the writer.

The story is still good.

I give my condolences for your loss.
jemmamaree chapter 11 . 5/7/2011
Please write soon its really good but soooo sad:( but i like it so write soon
stormdog11 chapter 10 . 3/24/2011
good job! update soon! :)
crazybeautifuldisaster chapter 10 . 3/20/2011
Wow... Bella's kind of harsh to her brother... I understand though, she did just lose her best friend. I bet its the little girl who stood in front of her on the swings that touched her leg right?
ilovethetwilightsagagradof2018 chapter 10 . 3/16/2011
Is it rose? Plz update asap! 3 it!
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