Reviews for Foul Territory |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I loved tbis so so much! Basebell and Edward together, yummy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Kind of a fun story |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice history |
![]() ![]() ![]() your profile how do.I find it? |
![]() ![]() ![]() hlpefully Rose gets nicer |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice catch Edward |
![]() ![]() ![]() Baby time. That is one lucky baby. I loved all the future takes. |
![]() ![]() ![]() She was so cute looking at the scoreboard but Edward's proposal was so much better. Love their banter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() They are both on the same page, more together time. Great Christmas. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This Edward and Bella were destined to be together. Fate and baseball were the way together. They seem to be a very special couple and no Rosalie or Tanya would keep them apart. I loved your story. Thank you for sharing it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rosalie is not a good person. She is a person who is either jealous or can't have others happy. If Edward is married to Tanya, who has moved onto another baseball player, I would say the marriage is over. Rose needs to mind her own business. Now she has not only ruined Edward's romance but Alice and Master's engagement party. Drunk or not she is nasty piece of work. She came to destroy for her friend. It seems Tanya and Rose are cut from the same cloth. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thank you for this really great story, very well written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ohhh I want more Epi’s of these two. Them running around after babies! Love it, thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing AMAZING And AMAZING x 1000! Thank you for writing this beautiful story. I loved it from beginning to end! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was honestly the best ending to a story I’ve read. I’m not dying for more. Well I am. I’d always love more but I’m happy with how you tied it up. Such a good story! |