Reviews for Foul Territory
DolphinAunt30 chapter 24 . 2/17
OMG this story stole my heart! I could not put it down. I stayed up extremely late reading and woke up early to read. And in between all I could think about was this fic. Imagining Edward in the baseball pants. Yum! Thank you for this!
mytwilightaddiction chapter 27 . 2/15
Love this story:) I think I've read it in the pass but it was still great to re-read.. thank you loving your bbward:)
WiseGirlGeek chapter 3 . 1/19
I'm so glad Edwards not a player . . . you know, girl-wise. yet
WiseGirlGeek chapter 2 . 1/19
yes, Bart is godsend. hashtag bay area love
Rebekah chapter 27 . 1/14
i loved this story so much. thank you for this.
EVK70 chapter 27 . 12/28/2016
Love it :)
Nookwatt chapter 9 . 12/26/2016
Just started this story . Love Bbward... horizontal..perfect
Guest chapter 18 . 11/25/2016
A drunk line I texted my BF was: mm wantsed Gummi bers
Denny52 chapter 27 . 11/21/2016
I don't know how I missed this story but so glad I read it. Loved it.
JazzieJ7777 chapter 16 . 10/22/2016
I'm loving this story, I'm so addicted to Twilight It's not funny, and you are becoming one of my fave writers. Thank you for putting your heart out there and writing your story about these characters, and allowing us into your words and pulling us into the story. That makes an amazing writer, you have a great gift thank you for sharing
JazzieJ7777 chapter 14 . 10/21/2016
yes I want to strip him out of his suit slowly and then lick every inch of that delectable body of his over and over...
petmom1213 chapter 24 . 9/30/2016
Very very good. I hope the epilog has him asking her to marry him and not just them being married. Or maybe that would be a good EPOV.
Anyway thank you for sharing your talent and time.
Mickey
petmom1213 chapter 17 . 9/30/2016
At least Tanya didn't want him back.
petmom1213 chapter 16 . 9/30/2016
Something still happened before the game to cause him to be upset. I think something bad has happened or is about to happen.
petmom1213 chapter 13 . 9/30/2016
I'd want to know why they broke up and if they were engaged or married.
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