Reviews for Foul Territory
cullensrule chapter 25 . 1/6/2023
They are both on the same page, more together time. Great Christmas.
cullensrule chapter 24 . 1/6/2023
This Edward and Bella were destined to be together. Fate and baseball were the way together. They seem to be a very special couple and no Rosalie or Tanya would keep them apart. I loved your story. Thank you for sharing it.
cullensrule chapter 19 . 12/21/2022
Rosalie is not a good person. She is a person who is either jealous or can't have others happy. If Edward is married to Tanya, who has moved onto another baseball player, I would say the marriage is over. Rose needs to mind her own business. Now she has not only ruined Edward's romance but Alice and Master's engagement party. Drunk or not she is nasty piece of work. She came to destroy for her friend. It seems Tanya and Rose are cut from the same cloth.
CLEFE chapter 27 . 11/5/2022
Thank you for this really great story, very well written!
Flora Mile chapter 27 . 10/27/2022
Ohhh I want more Epi’s of these two. Them running around after babies! Love it, thank you!
Flora Mile chapter 24 . 10/27/2022
Amazing
AMAZING
And
AMAZING x 1000!

Thank you for writing this beautiful story. I loved it from beginning to end!
Jillgrab chapter 24 . 6/13/2022
This was honestly the best ending to a story I’ve read. I’m not dying for more. Well I am. I’d always love more but I’m happy with how you tied it up. Such a good story!
Jillgrab chapter 20 . 6/13/2022
Oh the gasp. I loved that part.
Jillgrab chapter 19 . 6/13/2022
Holy crap! No way!
Jillgrab chapter 18 . 6/13/2022
We definitely need more drunk texting. That was hilarious!
Jillgrab chapter 15 . 6/13/2022
I’m liking the Bella Clause!
Guest chapter 19 . 4/6/2022
What?
Cullen Cousin chapter 27 . 3/18/2022
Loved the story, though I wish he played for Oakland instead. Born and raised in the Bay Area, moved to Texas in '94. Grew up listening and watching A's, especially during the Bash Brothers era (McGuire, Canseco and my favorite Lansford!). I watched the A's game on TV when Billy Martin and Tony LaRosa were the Coaches with players like Vida Blue, Catfish Hunter and Ricky Henderson. Was even watching the infamous World Series between the A's and Giants on TV when the Loma Prieta Quake rumbled through. We did follow the Giants, but they weren't my favorite except for Chili Davis.
cctwilight chapter 27 . 10/17/2021
Sweet! Edward and Bella are going to be parents! Loved the story!
cctwilight chapter 26 . 10/17/2021
Edward and Bella are getting married! Love it!
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