Reviews for 316am
Reeves3 chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
I shouldn't have read that because now I'm in tears, lol. The last line did it because that was the last time.

Great story and good job. :)
Sunshine and Chocolate chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Wow... knowing that that moment is the last time they ever get to be like that together that last line is a killer! This was wonderful.
LenaGuffi chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
Loved it!
strdstbttrfly chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
Love it. Please update soon.
Shanna chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
beautiful,your writing is amazing.

that was the last time they slept together - in that life...

I've been thinking how Kate might have thought about that night and regret how she acted the morning after. But at least,they had one more night together.

loved this very much,u should write more Jack&Kate 3
ale-la-pazza1 chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
This a very good story, I like the style and how you expressed Kate's emotions :)
NYR88 chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
Wow good take on that night.
Nille815 chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
Beautiful story... I can easily imagine that this was exactly what was going on in Kate's mind at this time. You captured them both perfectly :) My fave part was this... I think, it was all so good!: "She almost didn't respond, but found herself murmuring, "I miss you too," and it was much more vulnerable than she usually liked to be, even with the man she'd loved for three years."