Reviews for Mending the Broken
Guest chapter 18 . 11/12/2016
Started off good. . Then got repetitive. . Too much sex and Jane was piss weak
crime fictiction chapter 21 . 7/31/2016
at last
crime fictiction chapter 15 . 7/31/2016
good luck with that lol
crime fictiction chapter 9 . 7/31/2016
well it had to happen it was the next thing after breaking promise
crime fictiction chapter 8 . 7/31/2016
jane takes a lot on herself coz she feels she has to as to feel strong and invincible
crime fictiction chapter 7 . 7/31/2016
jane save the day lol
crime fictiction chapter 6 . 7/31/2016
and yes i agree maura should have told parents about jane being her gf she hurt jane but as angela says both will hurt each other its a learning curve in a relationship
crime fictiction chapter 5 . 7/31/2016
and very aroused to be taken so rough
crime fictiction chapter 2 . 7/31/2016
oh my wat a kiss
milagglad chapter 21 . 6/3/2016
I like, story cute
Jenn Deering chapter 9 . 5/8/2016
Fuck, they broke up! This hurts.
Joan chapter 21 . 1/2/2016
Nice story, well thought out. Liked the hot sex too.
mholder chapter 21 . 5/18/2015
Wow, you've been giving us chapter after chapter. Thank you! Maura seems really scattered. She's supposedly going to NM for Toby, but then wants Jane to want her to stay for HER and not Toby. I'm a little confused. Of course, so is Maura, so maybe that's the point. It's also well established that Maura is a bit OTT when it comes to blood ties and what they mean and what they don't mean. Maybe that's just an extension here. I actually don't mind the angst. It gives us a fun build up :) Off and on Maura has seemed harsh to Jane and I think that's what has people reacting the way they have been. Your reviews are blowing up for this story. It's awesome that folks are invested. Thank you for your efforts. I hope the ending of the story isn't rushed...
scar20253 chapter 21 . 9/26/2013
HelNik123 chapter 21 . 6/21/2013
Aww perfect story - perfect ending! :)
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