|Reviews for Tension|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Nicely written, but rushed, you are right.
Needs more build up. Some examples of Ash's rebellions against femininity, some more time spent arguing before Ash reveal how she feels.
| Lady Alstreim chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Very nice, thanks for a good fic. Really captured the mood and the way I think Ash would react in a situation like that.
| zettaslow chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
Oh yes, this is great, you must develop this. DEVELOP IT I SAY! DEVELOP IT!
| Jade Catherine chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
Short, but a good little look at how hard it is to actually talk to a parent about this stuff.