Reviews for Tension
Guest chapter 1 . 7/16/2012
Nicely written, but rushed, you are right.

Needs more build up. Some examples of Ash's rebellions against femininity, some more time spent arguing before Ash reveal how she feels.
Lady Alstreim chapter 1 . 6/28/2012
Very nice, thanks for a good fic. Really captured the mood and the way I think Ash would react in a situation like that.
zettaslow chapter 1 . 3/16/2012
Oh yes, this is great, you must develop this. DEVELOP IT I SAY! DEVELOP IT!
Jade Catherine chapter 1 . 9/30/2011
Short, but a good little look at how hard it is to actually talk to a parent about this stuff.