Reviews for One, Two, Buckle My Shoe
FaithinBones chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
Very good
brennanize chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
Absolutely heartbreaking, yet beautiful.
TravelingSue chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
Very, very realistic. I felt all of Brennan's emotions, could feel her heart breaking from being alone. Yeah, the alcohol I could definitely picture when she let go that would be involved. yet she's never let go that far in the show but definitely not far fetched in the least.

Booth being the rock doesn't surprise me.

Your writing invokes images which I really, really enjoy. So few add imagery to their writing and I find it refreshing when I read it.

I'm way behind in my reading... so you'll get notes from me from time to time.

Phoebe Miller chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
Loved this. Is there more to it?
Mylan chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
I don't know how to describe this...

there's like so much .. 'energy'.

It seems so real! GREAT JOB!

Will you continue this story or is it finished?
BandBfan chapter 1 . 11/19/2010
Really loved this one, and you brought the real Booth back...The White Knight in Shining FBI Standard Issue Body Armor,Kick Ass Booth...Luuve this Booth. Thank you, I missed him. I am having a few issues with the current Booth.

I have always loved Max, would miss him too if anything happened to him in the show.

So shot, you know has more than a little potential for a good gcatspjs story...just sayin

thanks again for sharing,

MorWeb chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
This is my favorite part of the year - Autumn & Halloween. Love scary stories! So I must admit that when I saw your one, two rhyme I immediately heard Freddy's (1-2 Freddy's coming for you, 3-4 Better lock your door, 5-6 Grab your crucifix, 7-8 Better stay up late, 9-10 never sleep again!) running through my head. So it is no wonder I was already on the edge of my seat when I started reading your story! In the end I am SO glad that Booth took the time to reassure Bones that she'll never be alone. No matter what has happened to them in HH's world the fact of the matter remains...they're a different kind of family.~MorWeb
ceeray3 chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
I love that no matter how Brennan tries to block Booth out, he will always find a way to her. And that even when she tells him to leave, he won't. Can't believe Max is dead. That was a shocker. Booth is so careful and tender with Brennan. To see her so undone is heartbreaking. I really loved this story and fully expect to see additional chapters! Pretty please? Cause this is just too good to walk away from!
daisy07 chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
This was excellent. Loved the use of the nursery rhyme, it was very effective.

Are you sure it's only going to be a one shot, because I would so dearly like to know more? And there's so much potential!
ccLozado chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
awww! I like it! especially the poem!
Tartantrace chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
Wonderful! You are such a talented writer - vivid, in character and so engaging...please write more soon ;0)
Val.W.3 chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
this is exciting to read cant wait to read more please update soon lol
Aching Bones chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
Hi there,

This was just fantastic...Had a feeling that Max was dead, what with the children's rhyme and...

'There was no time for distraction, just rest as everything around her fell apart'...

'She had nothing and was content with that. Content with nothing. Having nothing'...

Although you could have thought too that she was thinking of someone in Booth's life...

'He had someplace to be, he had someone to be with'...

That would not have accounted for Booth being so concerned for her though...Love how he banged the door down...How he comforted her, held her...How in the end she was glad for it...

'I'm sorry that I let you believe that I didn't need you'...

Of course you have to write at least one more chapter to this...So many questions left unanswered...How did Max die? If murdered, who killed him? Will he/they come after Bones? Who is Booth with? and of course 'Is he still with her and for how long'? Please write another chapter...Absolutely loved this...You usually do not write one pieces and if ever there was a need for more, you have it here...You have a full story (which you love) in this one...

my-completeness chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
Absolutely terrific!
vacruz2 chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
I felt her pain.

Great one-shot.
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