Reviews for The Fundamental Things
nayin17 chapter 1 . 5/26
haleyscott chapter 1 . 4/5/2014
Macceh chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
Wow! Really good use of the prompt, I'm seriously impressed! This is beautifully written, it's sad and sweet and wonderfully human and I loved it! Thank you so much for taking part in the challenge!
Stephanie O chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
I thought this was good, but still quite depressing. When Harry is saying, 'I was a mistake...' did you mean 'It was a mistake?' Just curious. Thanks for writing!
colouringcrayons chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
Loved this! Sometimes when people take lines from movies, or songs, the words seem too smooth and out of place, but this was amazing! You played it well, and Ginny sounded so true.

Now Must Go Read Some Ginny/Harry (causeyouputmeinthemood),

DustyDreamer chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
that was a little short, but really sweet. Good job :)
Fairqueen2 chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
I'm hooked. Please update soon, this is the start of a great story I feel.