Reviews for the horror gettysburg
MerlinWinchestr chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
I like it! A little short, but I like it! I especially love the ending where you said "are still marching". I love that! :D They are definatly still marching on! They are marching on through us, so long as we never let their sacrafice, blue or grey, fade from our history!

I really like the poem and who it shows the suffering. So many times we think back to the War and don't really put it in perspective that these were actual men and women who were fighting, dying, suffering. It's sooo great when someone thinks back and writes something like this, recognizing the suffering.

I hope you write more! :) I think your last line would make a great idea for another poem! :) Great job! :D