Reviews for Kiyamvir Ma'ar II
Miconis chapter 16 . 11/2/2014
After two years, is there hope of seeing this continued?
Quetzalcoatls chapter 15 . 5/9/2012
good chapter as usual! _ i was a little confused at the beginning Amvir is slightly nuts now or what?
Quetzalcoatls chapter 14 . 4/29/2012
you're back! _ great chapter! i think you might want to skip forward at this point to more present times like you were thinking. I'd like to see what modern gryphons would think of them! it would be entertaining no doubt, and then you can have them run into ma'ar again while he was falconsbane? either way good job so far i was half expecting Amvir to get thrown into the future from that collapsing gate or something like that it would give you a good excuse to skip forward if that what you want to do. update soon!
Quetzalcoatls chapter 12 . 5/8/2011
haha love the ending! way to drop the bomb there! - great job update soon!
Quetzalcoatls chapter 11 . 5/3/2011
another good chapter! - and just use x's like this xxxxxxxxxxx on its own line thats what i do and ill go check out the poll right now!
Quetzalcoatls chapter 8 . 2/2/2011
another great chapter! can't wait for more update soon! -
Quetzalcoatls chapter 7 . 1/2/2011
Fantastic once more! Update soon! ill be telling my loyal followers of your story! its good, and they number in the hundreds - expect to see a few of them over here as soon as i update Storm Warning in a day or two!
Quetzalcoatls chapter 6 . 1/2/2011
another fantastic chapter! and poor Tralj why did you do that to him? :' (
Quetzalcoatls chapter 5 . 1/2/2011
Fantastic story! i love this! update soon!