Reviews for UnEven
kastorey97 chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
I enjoyed this story and I really like your writing style.
vamplvr74 chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
Bravo BB. That was great!
dolphin62598 chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
This was great! I thought for sure it was Edward at first! :) Great job!
Iwant2sparkle chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
You, of course, know how I feel about this one-shot. It was fantastic and you did a fabulous job. You certainly deserved the recognition you received in the contest. : )
saltire884 chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
That was so good and such a unique way to do a chapter before. I've never seen that style used before but it really did fit. Your short sentences cut through all the BS and get to the point of the subject and let you know exactly what was happening and what he was feeling without getting lost in all the extra words.

I REALLY like it.