Reviews for Other God
YoungLazarus01 chapter 5 . 11/12/2012
I was quite disappointed with the way chapter 5 ended. You could have shown how intimate it was since for me, it was quite one of the climax of your novel. You could've describe more the intimacy of their feelings. I do like the way you show us how Fuuko and Tokiya interacted with each other while watching their "past". Overall it was a good chapter. Still excited to read the next chapters... Love you ;)
thepinkmartini chapter 14 . 9/18/2011
I can't wait for your updates! *patiently waiting* Cheers!
Clovergirl100 chapter 13 . 9/2/2011
AWWWWW! ! fuuko in the past suffer sooo much in the past because she was protect him

cant wait for next chapter
satomika chapter 13 . 7/13/2011
yep!

i love the way you did it...

sorry if it took me a long time to review...

yes i graduated sometime in march, but the actual march was somewhere in the middle of april...

but still, i was running around, hospital-hopping from affiliating hospitals in baguio, to others in la union, to complete my cases until one day before the filing of cases in may...

i thought i will not be able to make it, but thank goodness i did...

and thank goodness i did not have to go as far as abra or somewhere in the mt. province...

i already started reviewing in a review center on the last week of april, but since i haven't finished my cases, i have to skip some lectures...

may came and went...

june came, then suddenly, our review center was attacked by the diarrhea plague...

not everyone was attacked, you could say, a fourth of our population in the review center did, though...

my friend was one of them...

she took half-days...

she's my friend, but we're not THAT close, so imagine me having fever the next day and having the diarrhea plague attack me...

i went to the doctor...and to cut the story shorter, i was sick the whole month of june, extending to the first week of july...

i was like sick while taking the boards...

and someone whom i know, who was also taking the boards with me in our exam room, said that i was the only person who was noisy...

i was so embarrassed, i wished my illness actually killed me...

i only lost a few pounds, is all...

T_T
aki reinhart chapter 13 . 5/28/2011
Been a long time since I get to read your fics, for that I must apologize. But I totally love how the story is going so far. Tokiya seemed like a pampered prick here, but it's good he finally found out Lilith's secret. Hope you'll have the heart to forgive me and update. :) Cheers! -Aki
thepinkmartini chapter 13 . 3/28/2011
sorry for the late review! that was an awesome chapter! the last part came as a surprise to me. really good.
MaLoRaLover chapter 13 . 3/22/2011
SIMPLY BEAUTIFUL :)

OTHERGOD14 PLEASE
Suryasree chapter 12 . 3/5/2011
I loved this chapter. And I can't to read more about lilith! XD It sounds too interesting to miss. Sorry for the late review. College here really kills. :(
Eirist chapter 12 . 2/27/2011
good grief. tokiya with angel wings... i think my thoughts stopped at that and can't move one. haha. well done chapter again ms. raven. i don't know which is hotter and has more impact for me... tokiya saying he'll maim ash or the part where fuuko was musing that asmodeus was her ash. but definitely ash is hot. haha. i can barely breath while reading the last part. too much excitement. perfect choice with beelzebub. haha. it was fun to imagine majinbu as a demon. and no i cdon't hate kurama, i can never hate that guy. haha. but, i'm rather disappointed with tokiya here. i wanna whack him in the head if i can. anyways, congratulations for passing the boards. and next chapter please!
MaLoRaLover chapter 12 . 2/26/2011
I don't understand the first part

about the three swords

How Gabriel had the three of it while the swords already have keepers in mind.

How the sword of lucifer became Samael's...

I dont understand everything actually
satomika chapter 12 . 2/25/2011
nice!

i love it!

gosh!

i couldn't read fics and watch anime for two whole weeks because of coro ward duty...

super duper toxic!

and then the azkals are training in baguio and i really couldn't concentrate much!

gah!

anyway, thanks for the info and advice...

well, i'm going to take the july exams...

i'm going to test my luck and see if i can realize my dreams the way i want it to...
thepinkmartini chapter 12 . 2/25/2011
good chap! i kind of like asmodeus to be honest. and majin boo as beelzebub...odd but cute!
TuckingFypo chapter 12 . 2/25/2011
...I actually can't imagine Fuuko-chan being with another guy other than Tokiya (or Raiha) but that's just me. xP

And yes, everyone calls me TF! xD

I also added you on Facebook recently (Natsuko) since I really really love your drawings! :D

This chap was pretty cool and I can feel Fuuko's pain really well. :( Huhu...

Update soon!
Eirist chapter 11 . 2/17/2011
As much as I loathe to say this... I do like the part where Fuuko and Ash were talking. I can't pinpoint it, but their exchange seemed powerful for me, that is for the lack of a better term. and angel raphael in chibi form? i'd definitely want to demand a drawing of it from you. haha. pretty cute. i really to commend you with your choice of the demons' images. kurama as ash? kurama as demon? woot! that's just deadly. i'm definitely joining you melt into a puddle. ran fujimiya really looks like tokiya and i'm babbling with all this bishie talk. haha. if you don't mind me asking, what are your references here? i was prompted to do a little research since i began reading your fic, but i kinda got distracted. hehe. silly me. im waiting for the next one miss anne.
aki reinhart chapter 11 . 2/11/2011
I WANT MORE! Need I say more? :)

I love the twist in Ash and Fuuko's past. Hawt! :)
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