|Reviews for Yearning to Breathe Free|
| JazzieJ7777 chapter 1 . 9/23
this would make a great fic, hopefully one day you will make it one, would love to read it
| meelee72 chapter 1 . 7/30/2014
Very cool, i've never read anything quite like this one.
I can imagine how close they'll all become.
Enjoyed it. :)
| Siriusmunchkin chapter 1 . 8/10/2013
Totally loved it.
| escarlet 12 chapter 1 . 8/3/2013
could you make a second chapter,that would be
| kitty j chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
Dearest Which Witch,
This is a lovely story. So different, unusual, original. Not much higher praise I can give you. Bring more soon, please!
| Agena K chapter 1 . 11/6/2011
This is the BEST A AU twilight story that I have ever read. well done.
| hotmama4jd chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
This is a great story! It killed me to know that it took over 2 years to see his son. *sob*
| Whats-My-Username-Again chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
That was great! I've never read an Alcatraz twilight story, so you get an A for originality. Keep on writing!
| Veronique24 chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
WOW! How you make reading 12000 words so easily and effortless is amazing! Love your writting and get wait to open another one of your stories!
| MessyBar chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
Wow, that was really amazing. You know I love your details and this was full of them. Building the raft and all they had to do in order to be with their families. Really great!
| Jadedtigger chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
I am in tears right now. I loved it...stunning, fabulous, fantastic!
| A Cullen Wannabe chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
It turned out really well guys! Good job!