Reviews for Penance
brittklein13 chapter 2 . 7/19/2013
Guest chapter 1 . 2/5/2013
Lucifer can't let Sam die. He said so in Episode 3 or 4 or something.
minaghostwolf chapter 2 . 2/17/2011
waaah! Sastiel! I loved this.
LaylaBinx chapter 2 . 2/9/2011
Awww *fan girl flail*
medicgirl chapter 2 . 10/3/2010
Oh, man... this was such and awesome story. Dean being forced to watch Sam suffer is the worst form of torture for him, and to be forced to watch him die is just horrible. Good thing Cas arrived to save the day! You see lots of Dean/Cas stuff, but never any stuff. I like it!
Myurra-K chapter 2 . 10/2/2010
Wow, gift wrapped in a trench coat, feathers, and a whole lota possessive awesomeness!

I was getting so worried toward the middle, I thought he was actually going to die before Cas got there! I was actually thinking 'why didn't she select tragedy for this fic?'

And then he showed up, all feathers and trench coat-iness. I love what he said "You crossed the line when you touched him." for a second I didn't know what was going on and I very nearly slapped myself before I re-read the part again.

I love how you had Dean struggling in the background, and included the guilt he was feeling over not being able to protect Sam.

I wonder how things are going to go when Sam wakes up again, and I'm half waiting for Dean's whole 'you hurt him and I swear to god' speech to both of 'em XDD

Good luck with the next chapter, I have no doubt it'll be just as good if not better than the last two! D

ema neslaf chapter 2 . 10/2/2010
aaaww! go cas! woot! great chapter! please update soon!


DBwinchester chapter 2 . 10/2/2010
i know i say this all time because i just adore your work, but I love this story! Yey cas to the rescue..sam wanting to protect his brother from seeing him die again, dean screaming/sobbing in the background - it's just so perfect!I can't wait for more!
T.L. Arens chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
That demon was having way too much fun. Was he there all by himself? I can't imagine a demon strong enough to take on both the boys unless 'said critter' was an angel himself. The story reads almost like Demon Boot Camp, if you ask me. I'd like to read more information; the 'critter' said there were others like him who'd love to see Sam 'offed'... except they don't seem to realize that Luci can bring Sam back... of course, Luci would have to FIND Sam, first. (gotta love Castiel)

I'm at a toss between who I want to see off the demon more; Castiel or Dean. I guess you'd better let Dean have at 'Critter'. Big Brother needs to blow off some steam ;)
fayesanuttytart chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
ooo i like sam toture storeis,.,,good start

Myurra-K chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
Ohmigod, I love you and hate you and love you some more for this! Hate because I'm falling asleep at my laptop and totally about to face-plant the keyboard trying to stay awake and read this a second time so I remember it, and love-love you because this the best possible start to this story there could have been.

"Don't look" broke my heart, and I honestly nearly cried over it. (man, I'm so emotional!)

Awe man, now I'm really aching for the update, and more sastiel, and more beat-up Sam and Dean. That demon's gonna get whats coming for him, and it's coming gift-wrapped with feathers and a trench coat!

How many chapters do you think this story's gonna be? (so I don't make the same embarrassing mistake as last time XDD)

Good luck with the next chapter!