Reviews for The Addition
Sofi chapter 4 . 7/21
Is this story over? It was just getting juicy :c
Guest chapter 4 . 4/14/2014
update! please.
ryankrage77 chapter 4 . 4/11/2014
wow. mind blown. awesome so far, but i hope max/robin gets her arm back - preferably thank to her healing abilities rather than becoming an animorph.
you've really got thier personalitys sussed - especially tobias. max is a little harsh - normally shes more sarcastic than angry, but taking the situation shes in into account, its undestandable.
keep up the good work i.e:update!
HTKWolfe777 chapter 1 . 5/27/2013
Beautifully written! Great job keeping the charcters in character, and I'm definitly reading the rest of this!
Fritter Critter chapter 4 . 9/18/2012
MORE. POST MORE! You write like the actual K.A. Applegate!
CatGirlFireflare chapter 4 . 8/23/2012
Yo! Please please please update! I found and read this fanfic months ago, and you have not yet added more chapters of awesomeness to this already very-cool fanfic! Pleeeeeaaaassse update!
Guest chapter 4 . 7/6/2012
Firestar001 (my username for FF)

This is A MAZING! Please keep up the work or continue the work please!
Guest chapter 4 . 6/30/2012
Oh. My. Gosh. This. Is. So. Good. Please don't be lazy! Please continue this! You haven't updated in A YEAR AND A HALF! PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE!

-phantom reviewer

P.S. Tell me this isn't completed. Tell me you're not ending it here. In the name of all DECENCY don't end this here!

P.P.S. Unless the girl morphed another human, she probably won't be able to regrow her arm. Tobias couldn't even heal his hawk form's arm be morphing something else and demorphing.
Guest chapter 3 . 6/30/2012
Well well WELL! I was wondering if the blond girl with one arm was the crippled avian-american, but I'm all like "herp derp there;s no way that's her!" Facepalm. Anyway, Jake tin love with Raachel when they're wolves really isn't that surprising. Controlling a male morph that happens to be surrounded with several genetically identical females has to be difficult.

-phantom reviewer
Guest chapter 2 . 6/30/2012
I see some VIDEO GAME HUMOR! *instantly turns into a slobbering lunatic fan of this fanfic* YEEEEESSSSSSS! *comes to senses* Okay. Um, so, when you mentioned Mario and Wario, were you referring to Super Mario Land 2: The Six Golden Coins, or Wario Land: Super Mario Land 3?
Also, when will the Flock show up?

-phantom reviewer
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
Marco's interior monologue is pitch-perfect, in my opinion, but the whole drug-dealing and almost-being-mugged elements (as far as I know) don't make any appearances in the books.

-phantom reviewer
sopranokittythegreat chapter 4 . 5/11/2012
Oh! And by the way, you're being LAZY again. (hint hint) T_T

It's been OVER A YEAR! T_T

Just lettin' ya know, like you told us to. T_T

So don't get mad, I'm not being pushy. Just followin' orders.


... that is, or your fans will...

which is worse? would the Yerks be more merciful? maybe...
sopranokittythegreat chapter 4 . 5/11/2012
Here's one of those emails you love!

And you know what I love? When I get up in the morning to find that the stories I like (as in yours) have been updated!



killroy225 chapter 4 . 4/27/2012
please tell me you will update this soon
sopranokittythegreat chapter 4 . 3/17/2012
I love your story, it's incredibly well written.

I also enjoy the long chapters. )

But, it is only 4 chapters long and you are being lazy again. P

I really, really, really wanna know what happens next...

please write more!
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