|Reviews for The End|
| TiaKisu chapter 4 . 7/17/2012
I didn't realize it has been so long... time certainly seems to fly by. Anyhow. Nice update there, Mody. I really like how Patrick found Bryn's ability to be 'cool'. Wouldn't have expected this kind of reaction either, but it was really fitting. And the little telepathic chat that Maeve and Bryn had sure amused me. My fav would have to remain the reminiscence of Doubar and Bryn though, or rather her feelings for him which you incorporated in a sweet and subtle way (her reaching for her wedding necklace was a great move!). Well done there. Am curious as to what Patrick is going to ask the girls about. And whether he'll mean trouble in the end. Nice story so far. Go on writing. Greetz, TK
| TiaKisu chapter 2 . 10/7/2010
Hum, I have to say that in general I'm no fan of "we take the crew but let them live in modern times" but your story's got something that I like. Dunno why, but I like this chapter. It's well written and seems to lead to a thrilling story. I am suprised about the "immortal" thing though - reminds me a bit too much of the "Highlander" stories (mainly because of the head-thing), but that's okay.
Go on writing. I'd like to see where you're taking this to.
P.S.: It must be horrible to live forever and see all your loved ones go. :o(
P.P.S.: The lecklace Bryn is keeping... it's the one you mentioned in "a new life" right?
| Anime Princess chapter 2 . 10/4/2010
Maeve, Dermott, and Bryn are immortal...
The only way to die is if someone takes their head or drain their powers...
Interesting...will there be a reincarnation spin on this?
| OiseauLune -Moon Bird chapter 2 . 10/4/2010
So what do you have in stock for them before the end of The End ?
I 'm glad to read another story, yes!
| Anime Princess chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
The End, indeed.