Reviews for Decisions
godess bubbles chapter 1 . 8/28/2014
It made me smile...
chocolatelover1 chapter 1 . 2/17/2011
Aww, I thought it was so cute!

Very nice. It was sweet with just enough detail to spur my imagination as I read through the Dialogue.

Awesome job!
inkinmyheartandonthepage chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
hehehe beautiful! loved it
Keyrani chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
cute! i thought you did a really good job with all the dialogue .
chorus chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
...and I did read it as soon as I got the posting notice! :) :) :)

Excellent dialogue. Whenever in doubt, read it out loud. If it feels like a good conversation, it is. If it feels weird, editing time.

Obligatory critiques: (1) punctuation (that goes for all of us); (2) early on, you have Arthur biting his lip, and very soon thereafter, Merlin does the same. Confusing, a little.

Standard criticisms: STOP BEING SO HARD ON YOURSELF! Yeah, we've discussed that, but, c'mon... :) :) :) :) :)

Great exercise in dialogue. If I were still teaching, I'd give it A-, the minus for the reasons listed above.

Can't wait for your next one! :) :) :) :) :)
fangirlbynight chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
Not silly at all. I'm happy that Merlin is worried about Arthur like that and I'm happy that Arthur promises Merlin that he won't turn out like his father. And the end is cute and fluffy ;] Until the next, AxA ;]
Missing Piece chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
I really like it. It's sweet ad concise, nice to break up all of the depressing ones i read. :D xx well done x
Alys5 chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
This was good, easy to read, the dialogue just flowed along and a happy ending.
MirrorFlower and DarkWind chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
oh wow lol it was nice i liked it!
scientia-potentia-est chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
It doesn't suck, and this story is far from crappy! So stop putting yourself down!

It's a very nice, sweet little one shot, which I enjoyed a lot :) I think you wrote them both really well, especially arthur's prattish stubbornness :) Arthur is always right ;D xxx
Beizanten chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
Great story. Very cute. Love the ending. And although Arthur try his hardest to fill his father expectation he did defy his father to save merlin