Reviews for Innocent
Kluvly chapter 2 . 3/3/2011
Love it!
ShowTime chapter 2 . 12/7/2010
Very clever.. I like it. Nice and simple.
Riia chapter 2 . 11/11/2010
This story was awesomee ! iLoved iht ! &&nd iLoved the ending line were eli says,"That's simple: I work better horizontally than vertically."

Lmfaooo ; Update soon ?
Soldier's Girl 27 chapter 2 . 11/1/2010
WOW! Your really good! I wouldn't ever dare to write something like this...All I have to say is your very unpredictable..but in a good way! Nice work! Please Update! :)
Clare chapter 2 . 10/22/2010
hshahahahahaha omfg eli why are u so much fun wen were standing uyp lmao!
The.Ocean.Shadow chapter 2 . 10/4/2010
LMAO! That was amazing. U should add more!
momentofweakness chapter 2 . 10/4/2010
omg i loved this

i was grinning and blushing and sfh;fakfaf

awesome. i hope you write more like this

it's your best :)
Danae chapter 2 . 10/4/2010
effing loved every word please continue
luckystar210 chapter 2 . 10/4/2010
I love it! :)
verbal acuity chapter 2 . 10/4/2010
I LOVE when Eli starts out rough in the beginning. ahhh.

THIS WAS SO AWESOME. I can't even.
xxxelijahxxxisxxxminexxx chapter 2 . 10/3/2010
Lol Thats simple: I work better horizontally than vertically! God I love him
literarylolita chapter 2 . 10/3/2010
Loved this...I just have a few questions...

1. Do they love each other? (like, have they said so)

2. This was believable except for the fact that Clare wouldn't do it without protection.

3. Write another chapter and get a cookie from me! I'm a good baker!
melancholymeanderings chapter 2 . 10/3/2010
Two words ur nt gonna like. Not enough! Sorry it just didn't do it for me I expected more. It was good dnt get me wrong. Sorry.
Ambiguous21 chapter 2 . 10/3/2010
loved that last line.

besides the darker makeup and straightened hair (just because i cant imagine her doing that for anything besides acting rebellious like she did in the commercial), i thought it was really cool. i liked it..
Jull chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
Beautiful creation and it was very good! Hmm so not yet? I can't wait til they do lol
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