Reviews for Prom Night
afallenleaf chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
beautiful. so so beautiful.
trench chapter 1 . 1/15/2012

love it!
whywolfcity chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
As short as this was, it was great, and I think that's a sign of a really talented writer. This captivated me right from the second line, and I wasn't disappointed when it was over - I think this has the perfect ending. :)
theredrobin chapter 1 . 3/7/2011
Very lovely, poignant. This line especially struck me: "He tries to find her between the lines and interwoven leaves of grass."

The "boozy-breath" bit reminds me of Looking for Alaska.
reader300 chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
I liked this, especially the Part about Whitman and the grass :)
Madison chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
wonderful, simplicity interwoven with deeper meaning. a true poet
charlieesque chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
Wow. I'm not a huge poetry person most of the time, but this is a really beautiful piece. On my list of favorite poems, it's right up there with 'Looking For Alaska'. (I think it's safe to place that book under the category of poetry, don't you think?) Keep up the good work.