Reviews for A Light in the Darkness
Valkyrie chapter 13 . 10/28/2014
I know it's been years but I really really love this fanfiction
It's awesome so far and really well written
And to top it all off it's citronshipping!
I don't know if you're still writing, but if you are then please please please, I beg of you, continue this
I know I'm not the only person who loves this, and regardless of whether I'm the only reviewer, a lot of people love it, many because I have personally shared it and recommended it to, despite its incompleteness
Long story short, we all adore it, the characters are well-written and the plot established but with enough mystery surrounding it to keep interest. We love it and would love for you to continue with it.
T chapter 13 . 7/27/2014
Aw nooo I just found your fic and I noticed it hasn't been updated in years! I was really interested to see what adventures Marik and Akefia would go on and how their relationship would develop. Citronshipping is one of the rarer pairings and it makes me sad that this one is incomplete. I do hope that one day you'll plan to update this.
Rueky Mitem chapter 13 . 9/26/2012
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEAAASE! write moar! ima on my knees begging ya!
Rueky Mitem chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
Aww JAM IT i cried! *Grabs young Marik and cuddles him* I'm so sorry baby! *Hugs*
Mariklover222 chapter 11 . 10/20/2011
It's Melvin, and he's thinking about hugging the thief king Bakura
Lunar Maelstrom chapter 13 . 10/15/2011
Firstly, I have absolutely no idea why this story has so few reviews. This is honestly one of the highest quality YGO fics I've ever read. The description is amazingly vivid and the pace is wonderful. I will say that this is a delight to read and that I weagerly look forward to more.

As for your Ancient Egypt vs Modern Egypt, whichever you feel would suit the story would be lovely. However, I think you may have mentioned somewhere that the Pharoah died thousands of years ago, and that the duties of a tombkeeper for this particular Pharoah was passed down generation to generation. Then again, I could be letting my knowledge of the show colour what I've read and filled in the gaps myself.
Anamique4 chapter 13 . 9/25/2011
It almost... SEEMS to be AE already... It all depends on you, but personally I don't think it would make much of a difference to the story, past or present. It's all good.

SOOOO CUUUUUTE. *flails arms* 3 Aww 'Kefi, comforting lil' Marik! I could just about die.

Anyways, sorry I haven't reviewed this chapter until now. I kept putting it off, 'til... Wow! It's been like- a month! XD
xMarikxBakurax chapter 13 . 9/13/2011
Heh, I feel a bit silly now. I thought the story WAS in ancient times, otherwise his village's slaughter wouldn't make very much sense. I think the story should be set back when Thief Bakura was alive btw, since you're asking :). I would have reviewed the other chapters, it I didn't know you were still updating. I do now, and thanks for continuing! :D Update soon!

ladyblackwell chapter 13 . 9/7/2011
Cute and cuddly was just the ticket. :) I also like Kali, he sort of reminds me of older-Marik with his snark and haughtiness. I'm interested in Kali's relationship with Akefia (does he look up to him as a friend? As a father-figure? Is he interested in him romantically?) Also curious about your plans for Odion, since it can't be random that he has that name.

I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
fabulous sun chapter 13 . 9/6/2011
The long description of the places were quite appealing. It will probably take a while unteil I memorized the new characters - usually, minor characters from the manga are used in that context. But since none of them fits into a criminal milieu, it's better that way.

It's rather easy to forget that this is set in modern age since they still use candles and stuff, but none of them smokes (for some reason, that habit gets everywhere) or uses modern technology.

I wonder if Kali will become Marik's rival. He has a rather interesting name.

Is there a reason why Akefia mostly speaks rather formally? I didn't notice until one of the men spoke, but seeing his manners, Akefia is probably from a different background.

Since I can't know what you're planning, I can't say much about a change of setting. I just had the feeling that it was already set in ancient Egypt, based on small details like radiocommunication and weapons.

Milleannis Clepta chapter 13 . 9/5/2011
AWW! This is the reason why I love Akefia!
Zafkyel chapter 12 . 8/28/2011
This fic is so excellent! Thanks to writing it! )
BakuraxMalikNum1Fan chapter 12 . 6/25/2011
so HAPPY u updated again! hope to read more soon _
AlisonTexas chapter 12 . 6/20/2011
Nice, I liked it ) (now that I finally read it, I saw the alert the day it was posted...)

You should uplaod part two as part of this fic, its easier that way. well, at least to me it is.
fabulous sun chapter 12 . 6/14/2011
A break for a month? Well, it can't be helped... Unfortunately.

I was surprised when you said that this is modern Egypt - I had taken it for ancient times. Not that much because of the lack of modern references, but because people were shooting with arrows. If there's some modern technology you can always count on, it's guns. Even in the most remote areas, someone has a gun.

The turn was expected, but I think it's good that Akefia's minions/fellow criminals were even named - showing that they have personalities, even though they're not important characters.

The doujinshi is probably "Satanail", by the way. But it is whole different from the story, since the doujinshi is child pornography, and this is not. There are other differences, anyway, but that's most striking.

Well... Enjoy your stay, and don't catch anything... :)
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