Reviews for X29
Ronchaeltor chapter 17 . 8/24/2013
Very interesting story but you should work on separating the dialogue but you had an interesting character i can also see a brother sister relationship between X29 and X23 so all an all pretty good story and can't wait for the sequel.
Guest chapter 17 . 12/13/2012
His code name should be wildthing or wolf
megatronus89 chapter 17 . 5/13/2012
man i love this story, but damn. i wanna kno more of x29 he seems to be very stingy but i kinda see a x23/29 thing kinda showing up but not in a romance form but like a bro/sis thing like she see him not as a threat(other then that he is...) but is will to try and show he he can coop with a normal life. but i think you should show logan going after him along with x23 to have a family bond thing to show up.

i hope i gave a good review to you liking... not very good at such things i was horrible in english class

eager to eead more

megatronus
Blair Witch Cat chapter 17 . 3/10/2012
The story is good but u should try separating your dialogue, when you have two characters speaking and don't separate their conversation accordingly it can be very confusing

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Thedarkstorm chapter 17 . 7/1/2011
it was cool i liked it i am speechless its like your watching a movie great job i would like too see i wonder...will victor finally find peace in himself and become Matt again and trust his dad and sister. looking forward to see more.
Katrinka and Nori chapter 17 . 4/26/2011
Can't wait for the sequel pleese post it soon!
WildWulfChild chapter 16 . 3/31/2011
Like ur character X-29 reminds me of my friend in highschool he would fight anyone dat pissed him off
WildWulfChild chapter 16 . 3/31/2011
Like ur character X-29 reminds me of my friend in highschool he would fight anyone dat pissed him off
WildWulfChild chapter 17 . 3/31/2011
Pretty good story so far don't like that u have him tryin to be a evil lone ranger and leaven Amy and her sister that likes him and he sort of likes her other than that good story.
WildWulfChild chapter 10 . 3/31/2011
Pretty damn smart going n 2 the F.O.H. to get away from the X-Men
weaponZ chapter 17 . 12/22/2010
wow... thats all i can say! please do more! this is an amazing story!
Ace Skyler chapter 17 . 11/21/2010
i like the storyline and the way it flows, but the dialoge is hard to follow other then that i like it.
Lorna Roxen chapter 17 . 11/12/2010
I love this! :)

Update soon! :)
Sasuke The Run Away chapter 10 . 10/24/2010
Please read & review 'X-men Evolution: Sisters' or 'Survival of Zombie Land'

This rocks! I like how you P.O.V's. (P: Point. / O. Of / V. View) Any way, I hope to read more soon, and I love X29! She's like, one of my fave charactors! Update soon kay, I'm really interested in what will happen next!
AceofSpades95 chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
i really love the story big x men evolution fan you should totally make as many chapters as possible
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