|Reviews for Is It Really A Coincidence?|
| kairi chapter 1 . 9/22/2012
nice story but there's alot of wrong words being used for example in the first paragraph you put "no other done..." it's suppose to be no other THAN. but awesome story
| SoftCoyote chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
Oh my goodness! I like this! :D
It was already really good in the first place and then you had to go and add Atobe which made it amazing! 3
Storyline aside... some bits I had to read over to figure out exactly what you were saying because of grammar mistakes. Just watch out for that in the next chapter. ;)
The main one I noticed was the use of "don't" In some cases, "doesn't" would have been more appropriate.
I can't wait for the next chapter! :D
| Romamama chapter 1 . 1/21/2011
hmm ohayou XDDD
well now that I've read this I have somethings to say.
1) Do you know what a Mary Sue is? Well it's kinda not good if the girl is one... (you know the perfect girl; beautiful, rich, smart, loved by everyone, bitchy or nice)
2) There are errors sooo I advise a beta (dun worry, we all have those too _ I have problems with spelling)
3) and ummm don't put a chapter saying under construction...it'll give the people (yes even me) false assupmtions that there is something after DXXX but yeah...it's like Author's note chapter...
4) The story is interesting (with the exception of the seemingly Mary Sue, urg) and Yukimura's so evil XDDDDDD poor Akaya, and I love how you depicted Niou and Marui...but Atobe should be more snobby...
| Sakurai Nayuki chapter 1 . 1/5/2011
kyaaa! so sweett!
at the second pargrph, "his beloved fukubuchou", sounds like a little shonen ai-ish! and i looove it!
for some reason, i didnt read as quickly as i usually do, coz your words are neat and simple to understand!
not too much twisting words. XP
keep up the awesome work!
and i am really waiting for your next project! XP
lots of luve,
| Coco96 chapter 3 . 10/17/2010
Aww Akaya's soo sweet!
| Papilio.Ageha chapter 2 . 9/30/2010
there're some grammatical errors. I found sometimes you used present tenses when it should be written in past tenses. it's still readable anyway.. so it's not that bad..
Akaya's so cute wben he said 'nya'. XD
Atobe's kinda OOC though.
update soon :)