Reviews for New Life
Guest chapter 6 . 7/9/2014
This was a great story and the ending was great as well. Poor Colleen it must be horrible for her when it was delivery time. :(
Rocklord105 chapter 1 . 11/20/2013
Is Jenna your made up Charecter? Or is she Jenna from Balto?
White Hunter chapter 6 . 1/18/2011
This chapter was really good, the best one yet and their were no spelling mistakes. You've really out did yourself this time my friend. I hope to read your next Road Rover stories within the future.

White Hunter, howling out to you and the spirits!
Flint2008 chapter 6 . 1/18/2011
Great story. Such a heartwarming ending. I think you did your best in this story. Keep at it and don't give up in future stories.

PS: I'm working on my next story now.
Phoenix710 chapter 6 . 1/18/2011
A beautiful story, and congrats to Hunter and Colleen on the birth of their son. I loved the sense of them all being a happy family and the way Hunter was right at Colleen's side through it all.

Hope to see the next one soon.
Rogue Rover chapter 6 . 1/18/2011
Excellent chapter and nice ending. It's great to see a new life brought into the world. Can't wait for the next story.
Omnitrix 12 chapter 5 . 12/28/2010
I'm looking forward to the last part of this. I see a few typos, but for the most part this is good.

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Romans 3:6-7 May it never be! For otherwise, how will God judge the world? But if through my lie the truth of God abounded to His glory, why am I also still being judged as a sinner?
Flint2008 chapter 5 . 12/3/2010
This was pretty good. I'm sorry to hear what you have been going through. I hope you feel better and recover. Keep up the good work.

(PS: I think I overlooked the part where Jenna first had Freeze/heat vision :P )
White Hunter chapter 5 . 12/3/2010
Good work on this chapter, I can't wait to see what will happen in the next one.

White Hunter, howling out to you and the spirits!
Rogue Rover chapter 5 . 12/3/2010
Nice chapter. I like the action and the resourcefulness of the Rovers. Keep up the good work.
White Hunter chapter 4 . 10/29/2010
Man, who would have thought. Looks like the road rovers have some extra help on their mission. I just hope it works out.

White Hunter, howling out to you and the spirits!
Rogue Rover chapter 4 . 10/29/2010
Nice chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
Flint2008 chapter 4 . 10/29/2010
Ah, as soon as I read "black cloak", I thought this figure seemed familiar. xD Anyways, good chapter, nice suspense there for a second. I wonder who's in charge...

Keep it up!
White Hunter chapter 3 . 10/26/2010
Oh boy, this does not look good for the Road Rover team. How will they get out of this mess?

White Hunter, howling out to you and the spirits!
Flint2008 chapter 3 . 10/25/2010
Hmm, a rover collar, huh? :D

Great chapter. Can't wait to see the rest. :)
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