|Reviews for Take me with you|
| ImpossibleLoveAuthor4869 chapter 1 . 4/12/2015
| Kaylee Buttface chapter 1 . 9/3/2012
A little bit too late to review but I'm just gonna do it anyway :P hope you take this as a constructive comment. The storyline is good but I honestly think you can expand the length of it. You know, to create a depth to it. Hope someday you will consider rewriting it? I really think you can do better. Character, have to say, too OOC. If you can push some of those OOCness aside, you can even make this a two-shot, from my POV. Beside all of that, it is genuinely good writing.
Btw, the doctor's name is Araid ang please don't write the entire story in bold. Ok? Hope to see you around.
| Aisaka88 chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
| Ninada chapter 1 . 8/19/2011
Simple and cute (:
| Enji86 chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Well, what a bold confession!
Try multi chapter. It's fun to read than one-shot.
| Citra Zaoldyeck chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
| Erricane chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
Well, it was your first try. I kinda like it. Moreover, the doctor's name is Dr. Araide. Moreover, you don't have to make all the words bold. But good try. I kinda like it.
| Miyano B. Ritsune chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
hola "xDcAddictx25" e leido tu historia y te quedo genial jejeje de verdad, bien q tengas un buen dia