|Reviews for This Is The Hunting Ground|
| jack the shmee chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
Why is everyone always so down on Merlin! "I didn't give you a reason to trust me," "I've lied to you from the first day I met you"? Translation: It's all my fault.
This is bullshit! He's saved Arthur's life several times that Arthur *knows* about. That should grant him trust above and beyond. Was Merlin supposed to walk up to Arthur the first time he met him and announce that he was a sorcerer? How about after one of the dozen times that Arthur says magic is evil and must be eliminated? It's retarded.
Also, why is Merlin so very self depreciating in these fics? At what point in the story line does Merlin not only sit back and let Arthur bash him, but help's him out with a non-sarcastic/frustrated "I'm made of pathetic badness"?
Just a hint? A clue as to why you feel the need to write him this way? Arthur's usually a jackass in these fics, and Merlin apparently supports his decision to be one, instead of verbally smacking sense into him as he usually does in cannon. It's the hetero version of every jackass/virgin romance fic ever written. Why? Actual question.
| TwiliFay chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
Very good and very cool and i loved it nice job
| Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
Another brilliant story! I love it! The writing it amazing! And the story is so sad! I feel so sorry for Merlin. The ending was hight impact and the story intense! I love it! (I think I mentioned that already!)
| MissMio chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
Do continue it, will you?
Honestly you've got me hooked:)
| Militant Delusionalist chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
I'm assuming you got this idea from the Dark Knight. Great job! I always loved the vibe at the end of that movie and I think you captured it perfectly! Loved it!
| Sweet Ginger Snap chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
Tragic. Its like Batman and Gordon.
| Jenn chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
I love this story! It is easily my favorite out of all the ones I've read, on any site! You are quite talented and i look forward to anything else you may write! maybe even more chapters to go along with this instead of it being a oneshot? keep up the good writing!
| Itallia chapter 1 . 10/7/2010
I liked it. I feel so bad for Merlin, though. He's all bloodied up and bruised. :(
| LovesAngst chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
Excellent story, I loved the boys together. Great work!
| Bluebellbird chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Wow! Amazing writing, great one shot loved the bit "trying to solve the riddle that made them both.". Great job! Congradulations :)
| LoBall chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
Very,very good! I like, that the beginning and the end are the same sentence. It would be nice if you could write a sequel. Pretty please!
| MontyPythonFan chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
Oh I LOVED that fic :-D
Was such a lovely change in the fandom, to have the understanding between the characters but also the steadfastness to the canon - you show it would be impossible for Arthur to stop chasing Merlin for a while And I love you for it! lol.
| Anonymous Fan chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
Sad but Awesome! Great story.
| Lilynette chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
I must say I wasn't expecting to like this story that much! Loved your writing and this entire story. Thank you for sharing, I greatly enjoyed it! :)
| Forbearnan chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
Great story. I love the suspense and the heart-breaking relationship Arthur and Merlin share. SO sad :-(