|Reviews for Never the End|
| Lucian32 chapter 17 . 5/27/2011
I really loved this fic! Thank you very much!
| TinTin11 chapter 17 . 5/27/2011
Wow, that was phenomenal! I think my favorite was 'L'...loved that bit. Also loved the continuous stream of hatred towards Castiel! It was almost amusing to go from all lovey-dovey to I'm-gonna-torture-him-so-much-he'll-wish-he-was-never-born. And of course, the ending was perfect! Always is, with you! Can't wait to see what you come out with next! :o)
| jensengirl4eva chapter 17 . 5/26/2011
Well now you got me crying (again). That was just wonderful. I can't get enough and will be waiting for your next update.
| Van Helvic chapter 17 . 5/26/2011
When you look for the word "perfection" in the dictionary, this story is what you see.
This is a beautiful masterpiece and it brought tears to my eyes.
| Jane88 chapter 17 . 5/26/2011
Not just good - that was absolutely amazing! So beautiful, so emotional... and so true. Perfect moment you captured here. There were so many great phrases in there - here just one that I totally loved:
"L is for Love. The word I've said to all the people who've ever been second-most-important, because I know it makes them feel good. The word I've never said to the person who's always been my reason for living. Because he knows."
And I totally agree, don't think Dean could forgive Cas for bringing down the wall in Sams head... yeah, as a diversion... I still can't believe he did that.
The alphabet idea is great, really creative. Oh I just love the whole story, definitely one of my favourites!
| casammy chapter 17 . 5/25/2011
good? is the more beautiful that is the well-read one in days, today it was sad and very disappointed but after reading this chapter of his fic ... it has raised the spirit and I am that I feel much better
| spinningroundandround chapter 17 . 5/25/2011
I read this story on my way to school, at 7:15. I haven't ha the chance to review, I was at a concert, till now. It's an excellent story, and anybody who can make Dean reading a storybook on the alphabet is someone who has the characters spot on. It wasn't OCC or anything weird like him being 'girly' or having a 'chick-flick moment'. Your Dean and Sammy are so perfect! Anyways an excellent Drabble that I can't wait to see the next in the series.
| Sparkiebunny chapter 17 . 5/25/2011
Wow. Hands down best chapter yet. I loved the creativity, the phrasing, the emotion, and how incredibly in-character every part was. You're an absolutely fantastic writer, and this chapter is just another flashing indication of that.
"I is for Ignorance. The kind that's bliss. The kind that Sam had and I would've sold my soul all over again to keep him from losing." ...So true, and such a Dean thing to say.
"L is for Love. The word I've said to all the people who've ever been second-most-important, because I know it makes them feel good. The word I've never said to the person who's always been my reason for living. Because he knows." ...Said in a way only one who truly understands the Winchesters can understand. Beautiful.
Wonderful chapter, Jedi! Spectacular work! :)
| Kali1973 chapter 17 . 5/25/2011
I actually felt like crying while I was reading this [but in a good way]. Definitely looking forward to reading more from you.
| cold kagome chapter 17 . 5/25/2011
LOVE IT! AWWWE .LOVE PROTECTIVE DEAN/... MAINLY THE ONE WHO DO ANYTHING FOR HIS SAMMY.. YAY
| Kailene chapter 17 . 5/25/2011
I've been following right along with these tags and just had to delurk and respond to this.
You raise a great point, one that I hadn't stopped to consider - forgiving Cas for proclaiming himself a God would be easy, given the fact that he was juiced up on Souls. But destroying Sammy's wall, while being in complete control of himself...as a deversion...unforgiveable...and I hope that Dean makes him pay!
The alphabet idea was brillant, you managed to make each letter something poignant and
You really only mentioned Sam a hand full of times and never in alot of detail, but his emotional distress and turmoil from the wall crashing came across loud and clear.
And Dean...awesome job! You nailed the angry, hurt, scared, protective big brother, and how all else stops when Sammy is hurt.
| BranchSuper chapter 17 . 5/25/2011
Perfect - Dean's ABCs. Very well written.
| Our Eleventh Hour chapter 17 . 5/25/2011
Liked it. I also agree with you on the Ben and Lisa thing...well, more like the Lisa thing. A small part of me was hoping Ben would be allowed to tag along with Sam and Dean but...I was a bit shocked and mad when Dean had their memories wiped.
| SPN Mum chapter 17 . 5/25/2011
That was great! I like your version of the alphabet book. It really pissed me off too, that Cas would make Sam's wall collapse, just to try and keep Dean and Bobby occupied. Sam is such a stud, to go thru all that he did, just because Dean needed him. Their connection has always made me smile.
Looking forward to your new stories. I can't wait to see what you do.
| Brielle-W chapter 17 . 5/25/2011
That was totally awesome, I loved it!