|Reviews for Recipe For Disaster|
| Linoria chapter 9 . 10/29/2010
Loving it so far!
Really looking forward to more!
| Iuliana chapter 3 . 10/2/2010
just found this story and I think it's really great. pls continue.
| piquitv chapter 2 . 10/1/2010
thanks for the update :)
| Deej1957 chapter 2 . 9/30/2010
I would be more than happy to beta these two chapters for you so you can repost them, and beta any future chapters. - you need to use a comma rather than a period when people are speaking: "blah blah," said Peter. Comma between a word and a name: "He's a fighter, Neal," El said. Peter nodded in agreement.
Plot is a good one!
| Deej1957 chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
I very much like the idea of this story and am eager to see where you take it. You've got some good bones in this, but I'd like to kindly suggest you get a beta. There are several typos, some grammar oooooopses; while it's starting out good, it can be better :-)
| piquitv chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
good start :) please please update soon